An Excavation

Three men are digging a hole in the ground
Their supervisor is casually standing around
A bystander is not making the slightest sound
No precious pirates’ treasure will soon astound.
Dirt brought up beneath is forming a mound
One says a jackhammer is needed to pound
Hard limestone rock is starting to confound
Six feet down will lie remains of a renowned.

HONORABLE MENTION
Written June 19, 2021
For “This or That, Vol. 4” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative Excavation story/write. Did they hit gold???? Have a blessed day with your win...............
Hankins Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 1:18 PM
Thanks so much, Paula. Nope. They uncovered a famous corpse!
Alex Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 10:34 PM
A beautiful Creation. Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 8:30 AM
Thanks, Christuraj. I always appreciate your comment and your congratulations.
Dutta Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 10:41 AM
VERY GOOD. I highly appreciate. Blessings
Hankins Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 12:19 PM
Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment, Anisha.
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