An Example of Hope

Undergone tough time
Could not even drink and eat
Did not even move
But stood without losing hope.
So the Butterfly emerged
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 8:45 PM
a lovely thought, Supraja.
Kannan Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 1:32 AM
Thank you so much Andrea...
Haight Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Such wonderful imagery of 'hope' expressed your lovely Tanka, Supraja. I like the vision of the reborn emerging butterfly from the unmoving dark cocoon! 7 Hugs, Sandra
Kannan Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 5:45 AM
Thanks a lot Ks...Glad you liked it...
Turner Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 11:45 AM
A poet sees "hope". An average person sees metamorphosis:) I prefer the poets view! I enjoyed your poem, Supraja.
Kannan Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 5:44 AM
Thank you so much Daniel... Glad you liked it....
Dalei Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Nice poem. Enjoyed..//:) with love//Manmath.
Kannan Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 9:59 AM
Thank you so much..Glad you enjoyed it...
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