An Everywhere Day

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summertime heat wave balmy puff heaves scorched leaves round neath a rolling sun flocks of birds flap them wings profusely promising heights and cooled feathers a sandy shoreline relieves souls in traipsing trails of a surging sea shady trees branches outwardly soothing life neath its sheltered expanse as radiance slides some somber dusk satisfies as night waits its turn Date: 08/23/2019

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/2/2019 7:29:00 AM

Hello William Kakaula, a beautiful scene for your poetry. I like when the sunset meets the water, to me it looks like the sun is falling slowly into the water.I enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/2/2019 1:13:00 PM

Hello William Kekaula, I love sunsets. aloha! Have a nice day my friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/2/2019 8:03:00 AM

Thanks, my dear friend Darlene--sunsets are best viewed at any points in the world