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An Everglowing Candle

Boundless sea and magnanimous sky remind me very often how tiny I am--- how fragile this human body is. But deep inside me an inner voice starts speaking which crosses the limit of myself and mingles with nature's vastness. An everglowing candle dispelling the darkness from time immemorial.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/21/2012 8:29:00 PM
this is simply beautiful, Kash. Profound in a gentle way, specially your last stanza.
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Date: 3/19/2012 12:26:00 AM
I love your everglowing candle dispelling the darkness...Such a beautiful flicker through your words.. We are fragile compared to nature.. yet as that candle we transmit so much light.. tmfvs-Charma
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Date: 3/18/2012 7:45:00 PM
soupy soup mail for a Souper Male..ha ha.
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Date: 3/18/2012 7:43:00 PM
I tried to post it 3 times...oh well,,I will try again tomorrow...I have to read this new one of yours also...
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Date: 3/18/2012 1:55:00 PM
You take me from all that's great to the very small. Love the inner voice that reaches out to all that is. Amazing words Kashi! Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 3/17/2012 10:46:00 PM
I love how you displayed your inner thoughts as an everglowing candle dispelling darkness. Radiant lines, Kash! I often feel this way, too. If for the glistening thoughts contest, best wishes. Rhonda
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Date: 3/17/2012 6:27:00 PM
This is a wonderful piece, Kash. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Kim
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Date: 3/17/2012 5:30:00 PM
wow, I am sure you are going to knock it out of the park!! (that means win BIG) You did precisely what he said to do, Kashinath. What an awesome poem. I see you donned your sunglasses today to look mysterious like me and Iolanda. haha.
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Date: 3/17/2012 3:05:00 PM
Oh, Kash, so much in so little. Nicely done, this! Glad I stopped by to read this. Cyndi
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Date: 3/17/2012 1:53:00 PM
woohoo, i'm the first to be here! :)
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Date: 3/17/2012 1:52:00 PM
kashi!.. you are on a roll!.. love the radiant spell of this piece.. go for the win; you have my vote.. yeah!..:) huggs and love to ya, buddy! :)
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