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An Ever Rolling Dice

From the childhood days
playing monopoly games....
life is a betting

on the board of life
a dice is ever rolling....
no fuel shortage

fuel is the lust
only exhausts with the death....
the game of dice ends 





© kashinath karmakar (27th May,2011)

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By:kashinath karmakar

Contest:Monopoly The Game Of Life

Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2011

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Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/16/2011 2:40:00 PM yes so true it's all a crap shoot, someone asked me what changes would i make in the world? I think I'd wish for a universal language to unify us, I know it's been tried BUT maybe if we understood each other better there'd be less killing? maybe not? Light & Love Login to Reply

Kacey Greenlee Date: 6/10/2011 7:38:00 AM This is really good.Thanks for dropping in an congratulating my win..... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/5/2011 9:31:00 PM hi, Kash, I am racing again. But if I have time, I will visit the poet you told me about! Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 5/30/2011 5:02:00 AM This is quite a stunning entry for the contest Kash, love how you played around with the concept.. Good luck for the contest :) WNN Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 5/29/2011 8:52:00 PM great imagery imagination and similes KashinathHope to see it in the winner's circle Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 5/29/2011 3:38:00 PM Life REALLY is like Monopoly when you analyze it carefully--and if you live in America and own some of our greenbacks, they are worthless just like the paper money in the Monopoly game. Back to your poem....the analogy of dice ever rolling is cleverly stated...often times it is the luck of the dice that establishes one's success. Best to you, Kash. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 5/29/2011 11:33:00 AM Very thought provoking take on the Monopoly challenge, Kashinath-- wish you the ebst with this :) Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 5/29/2011 10:45:00 AM very creative, nicely done, enjoyed reading this one. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/29/2011 6:28:00 AM Choices good or bad make it what it becomes and the place of eternity..Enjoyed reading this one this morn..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and leaving a kind review of my work..Sara Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 5/29/2011 6:03:00 AM Well said and written Kashinath, good luck in the contest....:) Login to Reply

Anne Rutherford Date: 5/29/2011 5:29:00 AM Kashi great senryu and life is just like that . Good luck .Anne Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/29/2011 1:25:00 AM ps. I forgot to tell you, yes, Kash, rhyme is very important in sonnets. WEll, goodnight. Can't be up any longer!! Login to Reply

Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 5/28/2011 9:07:00 PM Interesting content and well done with the senryu form. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing and thank ou for your kind comments on my latest. Caroline. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/28/2011 3:56:00 PM From childhood to death, and it all plays out. I see you made your anology in a fine senyru series. Wanted to thank you for visiting several of my old poems today. Remember the hypnotist show I was going to see. It is sold out. Silly Me, I didn't reserve a ticket. Thought i would be able to just show up and get in! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/28/2011 2:54:00 PM as in life, the die is cast.. a superb piece with a personality of its own, kashi... winning;s best! :) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/28/2011 1:27:00 PM Stunning and super approach to the theme, kashinath Login to Reply

Sarah Seraphin Date: 5/28/2011 10:00:00 AM * “Good Dear Sweeet Kash. * I Hope You Are Doing Wonderfully. * Thank You * For Stopping By & Your Kindness * Much Appreciated. * In Response Unto Your Question * In Regards to Death * Afterlife * Gambling??? * Let's Just Say That * If I Had The Entire World Within My Back Pocket Then * I Would Pull It Out & Place It 'All' Upon The Table * Smile * That's How 'Sure' I Am. * What About You??? * Have A Beautiful Day * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” * Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 5/28/2011 7:54:00 AM Nice one K. K very much expect to see this one high on the winners list....luv Michael Login to Reply

Sarah Seraphin Date: 5/28/2011 12:41:00 AM * “Clear Pointed Poe * At Least Unto The Point of The Body's Death * Smile * That's When Real Life Begins * Dear Lovely Kash. * Eternal Life * Running On Solar Energy * Smile * Kool Verse My Friend. * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” * Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 5/27/2011 11:42:00 PM This monopoly game ends with death. Login to Reply