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An Ever Rolling Dice

From the childhood days playing monopoly games.... life is a betting on the board of life a dice is ever rolling.... no fuel shortage fuel is the lust only exhausts with the death.... the game of dice ends © kashinath karmakar (27th May,2011) ============================= By:kashinath karmakar Contest:Monopoly The Game Of Life

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/16/2011 2:40:00 PM

yes so true it's all a crap shoot, someone asked me what changes would i make in the world? I think I'd wish for a universal language to unify us, I know it's been tried BUT maybe if we understood each other better there'd be less killing? maybe not? Light & Love

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 6/10/2011 7:38:00 AM

This is really good.Thanks for dropping in an congratulating my win.....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2011 9:31:00 PM

hi, Kash, I am racing again. But if I have time, I will visit the poet you told me about!

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/30/2011 5:02:00 AM

This is quite a stunning entry for the contest Kash, love how you played around with the concept.. Good luck for the contest :) WNN

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/29/2011 8:52:00 PM

great imagery imagination and similes KashinathHope to see it in the winner's circle

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/29/2011 3:38:00 PM

Life REALLY is like Monopoly when you analyze it carefully--and if you live in America and own some of our greenbacks, they are worthless just like the paper money in the Monopoly game. Back to your poem....the analogy of dice ever rolling is cleverly stated...often times it is the luck of the dice that establishes one's success. Best to you, Kash. Gwendolen

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/29/2011 11:33:00 AM

Very thought provoking take on the Monopoly challenge, Kashinath-- wish you the ebst with this :)

James Foulk

Date: 5/29/2011 10:45:00 AM

very creative, nicely done, enjoyed reading this one.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/29/2011 6:28:00 AM

Choices good or bad make it what it becomes and the place of eternity..Enjoyed reading this one this morn..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and leaving a kind review of my work..Sara

James Fraser

Date: 5/29/2011 6:03:00 AM

Well said and written Kashinath, good luck in the contest....:)

Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/29/2011 5:29:00 AM

Kashi great senryu and life is just like that . Good luck .Anne

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2011 1:25:00 AM

ps. I forgot to tell you, yes, Kash, rhyme is very important in sonnets. WEll, goodnight. Can't be up any longer!!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/28/2011 9:07:00 PM

Interesting content and well done with the senryu form. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing and thank ou for your kind comments on my latest. Caroline.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2011 3:56:00 PM

From childhood to death, and it all plays out. I see you made your anology in a fine senyru series. Wanted to thank you for visiting several of my old poems today. Remember the hypnotist show I was going to see. It is sold out. Silly Me, I didn't reserve a ticket. Thought i would be able to just show up and get in!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/28/2011 2:54:00 PM

as in life, the die is cast.. a superb piece with a personality of its own, kashi... winning;s best! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/28/2011 1:27:00 PM

Stunning and super approach to the theme, kashinath

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/28/2011 10:00:00 AM

* “Good Dear Sweeet Kash. * I Hope You Are Doing Wonderfully. * Thank You * For Stopping By & Your Kindness * Much Appreciated. * In Response Unto Your Question * In Regards to Death * Afterlife * Gambling??? * Let's Just Say That * If I Had The Entire World Within My Back Pocket Then * I Would Pull It Out & Place It 'All' Upon The Table * Smile * That's How 'Sure' I Am. * What About You??? * Have A Beautiful Day * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” *

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/28/2011 7:54:00 AM

Nice one K. K very much expect to see this one high on the winners list....luv Michael

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/28/2011 12:41:00 AM

* “Clear Pointed Poe * At Least Unto The Point of The Body's Death * Smile * That's When Real Life Begins * Dear Lovely Kash. * Eternal Life * Running On Solar Energy * Smile * Kool Verse My Friend. * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” *

Kash Poet

Date: 5/27/2011 11:42:00 PM

This monopoly game ends with death.