An Ever Rolling Dice

yes so true it's all a crap shoot, someone asked me what changes would i make in the world? I think I'd wish for a universal language to unify us, I know it's been tried BUT maybe if we understood each other better there'd be less killing? maybe not? Light & Love

This is really good.Thanks for dropping in an congratulating my win.....

hi, Kash, I am racing again. But if I have time, I will visit the poet you told me about!

This is quite a stunning entry for the contest Kash, love how you played around with the concept.. Good luck for the contest :) WNN

great imagery imagination and similes KashinathHope to see it in the winner's circle

Life REALLY is like Monopoly when you analyze it carefully--and if you live in America and own some of our greenbacks, they are worthless just like the paper money in the Monopoly game. Back to your poem....the analogy of dice ever rolling is cleverly stated...often times it is the luck of the dice that establishes one's success. Best to you, Kash. Gwendolen

Very thought provoking take on the Monopoly challenge, Kashinath-- wish you the ebst with this :)

very creative, nicely done, enjoyed reading this one.

Choices good or bad make it what it becomes and the place of eternity..Enjoyed reading this one this morn..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and leaving a kind review of my work..Sara

Well said and written Kashinath, good luck in the contest....:)

Kashi great senryu and life is just like that . Good luck .Anne

ps. I forgot to tell you, yes, Kash, rhyme is very important in sonnets. WEll, goodnight. Can't be up any longer!!

Interesting content and well done with the senryu form. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing and thank ou for your kind comments on my latest. Caroline.

From childhood to death, and it all plays out. I see you made your anology in a fine senyru series. Wanted to thank you for visiting several of my old poems today. Remember the hypnotist show I was going to see. It is sold out. Silly Me, I didn't reserve a ticket. Thought i would be able to just show up and get in!

as in life, the die is cast.. a superb piece with a personality of its own, kashi... winning;s best! :)

Stunning and super approach to the theme, kashinath

* “Good Dear Sweeet Kash. * I Hope You Are Doing Wonderfully. * Thank You * For Stopping By & Your Kindness * Much Appreciated. * In Response Unto Your Question * In Regards to Death * Afterlife * Gambling??? * Let's Just Say That * If I Had The Entire World Within My Back Pocket Then * I Would Pull It Out & Place It 'All' Upon The Table * Smile * That's How 'Sure' I Am. * What About You??? * Have A Beautiful Day * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” *

Nice one K. K very much expect to see this one high on the winners list....luv Michael

* “Clear Pointed Poe * At Least Unto The Point of The Body's Death * Smile * That's When Real Life Begins * Dear Lovely Kash. * Eternal Life * Running On Solar Energy * Smile * Kool Verse My Friend. * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” *

This monopoly game ends with death.