An Evening Walk

The sky is pitch black
      A bright moon is shining
       Ideal for a stroll

      Chatting in the night
      A couple enjoys their walk
       Full moon lights path
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Mccall Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 8:36 AM
A beautifully written piece Darlene so much imagery to be conjured and so few verses well done my friend well done.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Hello Edward,I have enjoyed to write this poem.I also enjoy your poetry. have a nice day my friend.
Evans Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 11:18 AM
This reminds me of William Carlos Williams. His style of writing is like this where image is preeminent. Good poem. Thanks for sharing............peace!
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 5:08 PM
It makes me happy to know my poem reminds you of Williams style of writing.I like to give the images in my poetry. Thank you. Have a nice evening my friend.
One Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 10:14 AM
Nice take on the contest Darlene..
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 2:38 PM
Hello Silent One Thank You my friend. have a nioce day my friend.
Tor Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 10:02 PM
Enjoyed this moonlit walk Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 9:24 AM
Michael,so have I with my imaginary boyfriend that I dream of at night. Have a nice day my friend.
Swartz Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Nothing more romantic than walking under the moon with your love. I can see it clearly through your words Darlene. Thank you for sharing this.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 11:37 AM
Yes nothing like a romantic walk with your love one on a starer night and a full moon.Thank you James. have a nice day my friend.
Placington Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 6:01 PM
Very nice, really sets a beautiful evening feel :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 8:14 PM
Hello Guy,thank you so much. have a nice evening my friend.
Callus Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 4:03 PM
I like the vivid image which you project, Darlene. I love moonlit walks, too. Regards // paul
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 11:26 AM
Thank you Paul, so do I.Now just a memory. I am hopeful for more evening walks. have a nice day my friend.
Berggren Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 12:29 PM
A walk in the part is so great. I like to walk with my wife every morning. It starts the day off right.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 6:10 PM
Yes that is nice to have a walk with your wife in the park. I use to walk in the park with my husband, before he passed away. Have a nice day my friend.
Michael Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 8:42 PM
Sounds like an Island walk on the beach...It's a full moon over here and pitch black too... You made me imagine...good night Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 10:26 AM
Hello Arturo, it could be a walk on the beach. Or somewhere else Like a park. Have a nice day my friend.
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