An Evening Experience

She came towards me 
With arms opened wide 
Ever so gently caressing my upturned face. 
Softly,sweetly,so soothing, 
A lover's touch, 
Enraptured in the warm embrace of the beaming moon, 
Surrounded by pulsating stars 
In the dark velvety night sky, 
It felt like heaven 
A gorgeous end to a gruelling day!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Muideen Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 2:02 PM
What a pleasant write my friend. I love the way you constructed the lines and the poem in general. You are a brilliant poet..............A.M.
Gupta Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 6:33 AM
Very nice ending line ...
Aladeshawe Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 5:26 AM
Thanks Probir!
Aladeshawe Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 3:19 AM
Thanks Probir!
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