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An Evening Experience

She came towards me With arms opened wide Ever so gently caressing my upturned face. Softly,sweetly,so soothing, A lover's touch, Enraptured in the warm embrace of the beaming moon, Surrounded by pulsating stars In the dark velvety night sky, It felt like heaven A gorgeous end to a gruelling day!

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Date: 11/6/2016 2:02:00 PM
What a pleasant write my friend. I love the way you constructed the lines and the poem in general. You are a brilliant poet..............A.M.
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Date: 9/18/2016 6:33:00 AM
Very nice ending line ...
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Adeshina Aladeshawe
Date: 9/19/2016 5:26:00 AM
Thanks Probir!
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Adeshina Aladeshawe
Date: 9/19/2016 3:19:00 AM
Thanks Probir!

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