An Escape

On the day 
When we encountered,
What did you think of me?
As your predator or prey?

That buzzing sound
you created was to
threaten me or to alert me
that you were coiled on the ground?

When everyone said
you were venomous
and your single bite
would make me dead,

I was the one
who knew that 
I was alive then because of you
and without your concern I am none

You made us 
realise that you will 
never ever disturb anyone
unless we don't mess

You made them
discern the fact
that nature never fails;
You are a gem.

Thanks for not biting me;
Thanks for not failing me;
Thanks for your patience;
Thanks for your concern.


A tribute to the Russel's viper snake that I met within a striking distance while working in my garden.  It was so kind and reported its presence by making the hissing sound or else I would be dead by now...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/22/2019 11:27:00 AM
The hissing means that the snake was feeling threatened, Supraja. You are lucky it did not attack in defence. I fine tribute to a snake; I believe the the first of its kind that I have come across! Regards // paul
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Date: 10/21/2019 11:30:00 AM
Glad you are safe..your love of nature and its creation flows in every word.. uniquely beautiful sentiments, Supraja..message well delivered.
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Date: 10/21/2019 9:03:00 AM
Wow, this is a great poem about such an experience. I have been close to deadly snakes in the past too. Well done :)
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 10/21/2019 9:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by.Glad you liked it and oh you too had that scary experience? Thank god we are safe...
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