An Erroneous Deliberation
what I thought was right, seemed to be wrong
all alone, my thoughts did belong
to my self, I left alone, a thought so strong
it took me 2 heaven and brought me back home, I
remember when I felt so strong,
a day like yeserday felt so long
I know this is a feeling that should be long gone
my emotions seemed to linger on
a love I never knew felt so strong
A thought of GOD, i knew, seemed so long
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