An Epic Sojourn - Haiku

ancient boat comes cold
paddle slips into coma
sea curls wet, alive
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Moreno Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 6:41 PM
great use of imagery, nice work!
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April 4, 2020 at 3:00 AM
Hi Raul, Thank you! I appreciate your comments. Glad you enjoyed it. Earl
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 3:30 PM
such vivid imagery earl I especially love the final line:-) hugs Jan xx
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April 4, 2020 at 2:57 AM
Hi Jan. Thank you for noticing. The ingredients used on this one seemed to have worked out just right this time. I worry about using too much spice in creating my haiku adventures. Take care, Earl
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