Edward Mccormick Poet Terzanelle

An Epic Battle With a Simple Question

 A beautiful heart pines from afar.
To parallel freedom, we choose our master.
In Love, the Dragon and Unicorn are!

Celestial winged heart beats faster,
Over mountain and ocean meet polar eyes.
To parallel freedom, we choose our master.

Embarking from sun brewed and moonshine skies
Two alien races, in war, collide.
Over mountain and ocean meet polar eyes.

All brothers' swords raise, marching with pride.
Sisters of heaven let feathers fly.
Two alien races, in war, collide.

The angered clouds rain blood from the sky.
A new path finally found.
Sisters of heaven let feathers fly.

Brothers' swords low now to the ground.
A beautiful heart pines from afar.
A new path finally found.
In Love, the Dragon and Unicorn are!

In universe
Out bound energy
Where are we when we die?

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Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2013 at 1:04 PM wow Edward, your poem is awesome... and the ending has me in thoughts now....always~ PD

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2013 at 9:58 PM I sure like the image of a dragon and unicorn together. Cool!! And I see this won in the contest. Way to go!!!

Skat A January 12, 2013 at 11:48 AM Edward, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT

David Williams January 12, 2013 at 11:13 AM Edward congrats on your win, I loved this write, very thought provoking...David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 12, 2013 at 3:37 AM Congratulations on your winning spot Edward xx

Vicky Tsiluma January 12, 2013 at 1:07 AM Whoa Edward! This is awesome! Every part of it! Congrats on your win!

Yanny Widjanarko January 11, 2013 at 10:12 PM This is a great fantasy Edward :D congrats on your win too :D

Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2013 at 9:48 PM Edward.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser " contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

Debbie Guzzi January 11, 2013 at 7:46 PM Congrads on your win Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux January 11, 2013 at 6:56 PM Well done, congratulations.

Susan Palli January 6, 2013 at 1:49 PM Excellent write!

Heather Ober January 3, 2013 at 9:28 AM Wow, this is so well done. I love your writing style. Assuming this is for Richard's contest - Good luck! :)

Debbie Guzzi January 2, 2013 at 6:09 PM Good questions..where are we when we are alive? ;) Light & Love Edward Mccormick January 2, 2013 at 6:20 PM Thanks Debbie! I think PoetrySoup may just be the answer to both our questions! ~E=mc²