Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

An Endless Spring

Verdant bounty surrounding me.
Crystal waters and lush slopes I see.

Dancing at the foot of a mountain ridge
are rays of sunshine in guise
of yellow daffodils.

Amber tinged clouds embrace a lofty peak
and evergreens upon the mountainside
appear so magical I cannot speak.
Downward to the valley they seem to slide.

among wildflowers
water cascades from green cliffs . . 
in an endless spring

March 27, 2022
For Emile Pinet's A Combination Of Forms Poetry Contest
Crystalline- Kimo- Quatrain and Haiku
Syllables per line of each form checked by Howmanysyllables.com
End rhyme of the quatrain abab checked by Rhymezone.com

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Sam Kauffman May 2, 2022 at 3:11 PM Just lovely Andrea! What a beautiful painting to imagine. Congratulations on your win!

Christuraj Alex May 1, 2022 at 7:36 AM Wow! Congratulations!

Tania Kitchin April 30, 2022 at 3:10 PM Andrea, congratulations on your winning placement with your gorgeous poems!

Paulette Calasibetta April 30, 2022 at 11:34 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest. The imagery delightful. :)Paulette

Emile Pinet April 30, 2022 at 9:51 AM Congratulations Andrea! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, this contest had 36 poems entered and yet your poem rose to the top ten, you should be proud of your placing, this was a difficult contest to judge, but your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.

Caren Krutsinger April 3, 2022 at 12:04 AM Emile is going to love this one! I do too.

JC Brul April 1, 2022 at 7:19 AM This is majestic! Your last stanza thrilled me. All the best in the contest.

Bill Baker March 30, 2022 at 4:04 PM Nice combo, Andrea. Good luck! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Faye Gibson March 29, 2022 at 1:44 AM Well done, Andrea; I am mulling this contest over and over and over. haha!

L Milton Hankins March 28, 2022 at 8:27 AM Wow, Andrea! Your poem took me back to those West Virginia hills I love so much. I see this rising to the very top! I'm sure Emile will love it, too. A FAVE!

Susan Woodrow March 28, 2022 at 8:10 AM love this esp the daffodil guise, sliding evergreens and the endless spring ... beautiful :)

Joanna Daniel March 28, 2022 at 7:08 AM You have a natural flow to each form, Andrea, I am gonna skip this contest, he doesn't seem to like whatever I write...

Vijay Pandit March 28, 2022 at 4:32 AM Verdant bounty indeed! Superb imagery throughout, Andrea. A vibrant poem you wrote.

Silent One March 28, 2022 at 2:12 AM You must have written every form around! So this one would be no problem for you... I like your haiku the best thought...