An Encounter of the Once In a Lifetime Kind

Encounter of the Once in a Lifetime Kind

Waiting for his appointment, he scrutinizes her
(she’s oblivious to him).  Long tapered nails,
like wing-tips of scarlet butterflies, 
flit above a keyboard, and her perfect form
sits poised, tall and straight in her seat.
He imagines her in red chiffon. . . 

seated in his sports car, the bodice of her dress
tight against white skin of ample apple breasts.
Long tapered legs emerge, and red high-heels
touch street as he takes her small soft hand
and helps her from the car.
Inside the club, the music plays calypso.
He finds himself a slave to hips that undulate
beneath a swaying skirt, and long svelte arms
that draw him in. . . 
Her eyes are hieroglyphics; ravishing.  
He cannot fathom what she sees when
he is in her gaze. Perhaps she is a vampire.
Common though he is,
his blood is just as red as any man’s.
Would it be so bad to have that ruby mouth
upon his neck. . . . . ?

The eyes he could not read are looking up
at him from her computer. Now he sees
what he missed in reverie.
Her eyes are two comets with a brilliance
which he’s never seen before.
Such as these are glimpsed 
but once in a lifetime. They travel over him.
How can he even hope to ever be their sun?
Her smile is a rosebud now opening to him.
She tells him he can go into the room.
And as he turns away, he looks back
one more time, wondering and wondering
what he might abscond with when he leaves.
What of hers could be his souvenir?


For "Free Your Mind~! (Free Verse Only)
Contest by Chris D. Aechtner back in 2011

And now for Linda's Your Best Free Verse Poem Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A. Sharma Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 12:57 AM
Wonderful write Andrea.. congrats on big win!
Raven Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:41 PM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations for your win in the contest....VLAD.
May Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 1:08 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
Gentry Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 9:26 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your win! This is absolutely awesome, intriguing, mesmerizing almost. You are so talented. :)
Scars Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Lovely lady Andrea, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 4:14 PM
wow this is hot hot hot congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 3:59 PM
Andrea, Congratulation on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "Its a lie" if you'd like. I hope you are enjoying your day. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Davis Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 1:43 PM
Andrea What a very sexy, passionate, and hot write. My cheeks are turning red from the hotness of this poem. LOL Thank you for the sweet comment on my Lost For Words poem.
Babcock Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 6:22 AM
wow,wow hot and enticing leaving much to the imagination . I see this was a sizzling win, ha ha. Congrats . love phyl
Neels Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 5:17 AM
Hehe Andrea, I had to laugh at Harry's comment ;) Congratulations on your win with this hotty "ample apple breasts" one.. Really enjoyed this, made me forget about work.. love Wilma
Mannan Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 5:04 AM
Wow hot and beautiful. I did imagine the whole thing. many congratulations for this win.
Villarosa Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 1:33 AM
A very vivid detailed recollection of an encounter perhaps a fascinating one. Congratulations Andrea on your well deserved win. (^_^) Noel.
K. Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 10:51 PM
I sure am so happy this scored high, sweetie! this was truly an entrancing piece that's wonderfully written-- Way to go to you for your win :D hugs to you :)
Sweetheart Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 8:23 PM
Congrats Andrea on another great win in Chris's contest luv.. another awesome fantastic write and win to enjoy with luv... we took the day off and just got home ..at midnight..here ..luv..
Horsman Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 8:09 PM
Wow Andrea, i'm getting too old for these sultry poems, but what the heck, it has made my day, you are sure one very talented lady. oh by the way congrats on your placement. awesome. Harry
Devonshire Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 5:39 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fine poem, Andrea. Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 4:36 PM
that was fantastic, congrats on your win in the contest
Mehta Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 12:41 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Chris, Andrea
Fooksss Aka Lynette C. Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 11:51 AM
why is my nickname sybil?(: lol.soooorry andrea, this is a random comment.im just on surious writers block.
Brown Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Chris's contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Aul Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 11:34 AM
Another win - who would have guessed? ..... Congrats and thanks for the comments ........ George
Guzzi Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 10:11 AM
Yikers stunning Congrad's on the BIG win & so proud to stand beside you. Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 9:22 AM
whoohooo.. well deserved win with lots of imagery to chew on... CONGRATS, andrea.. soup mail! :)
Richards Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 8:25 AM
I missed this one earlier....but can see it so clearly now......how many other will see themselves, and what might have been? Great piece, Andrea...sad indeed that it touches on such reality! Congrats!
Horne Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 8:23 AM
Great poem - congratulations, Andrea : ) Jack
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