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An Enchanted Place

"I open the door and cross the threshold of imagination" A Rambling Poet An enchanted place Where ex lovers still love me Dead relatives live Tears from the past dry Years of mourning and pining A forgotten dream Failed attempts are successes Rejections acceptances Then I walk back through the doorway Ready to accept reality Haiku, Tanka and Crystalline Jack Horne for Constance’s Three Gems contest Written 29th July

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Date: 8/13/2011 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by Constance La France "Three Gems" Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2011 12:06:00 AM
I LOVE THIS.How did I miss seeing it before. Yours is so REAL. One of the best!!! Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 8/12/2011 11:53:00 AM
Congrats Jack on your wonderful win with these brilliant lines of great expression my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 8/2/2011 12:35:00 PM
nicely done. they all flow together seamlessly. I really love the haiku part. good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 7/31/2011 11:03:00 AM
great yahoo Jack thankxxx... the Captcha is need though to keep count of points and contest wins I believe..so feeling the same way u do.. by the way can u access your member page as I cannot luv...
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Date: 7/30/2011 8:13:00 PM
An excellent write here Jack...enjoyed.Best wishes.
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Date: 7/30/2011 7:31:00 PM
impressive choices for your forms Jack and a super write on the theme luv.. good luck in the contest with this brilliant beauty luv..
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Date: 7/30/2011 9:23:00 AM
A hard task tanka and crystalline are very very nice! & excellent tying togther of concept! http://sites.google.com/site/graceguts/essays/haiku-checklist Light & Love
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Date: 7/30/2011 2:39:00 AM
Very well versed..A favorite for me..Love the last verse.Reality.....hugs to you..jo
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Date: 7/30/2011 1:04:00 AM
Smile, *^_^* “You Know, I Stood Within `The Beautiful Arms of Jesus Christ,` In Heaven Years Ago Now * I Walked With `His Majestic Beauty` *^_^* With Others Yet, Whether It Was Also In Heaven or Here On Earth or Somewhere Else I Could Not Tell &, THIS, IS, my TRUTH & REALITY! *^_^* My Dear Precious & Priceless Friend = Yet, Do Understand What You Are Saying Amid This Reflections Verse == And Ones Imagine May Be Anothers Reality & Visa Versa???.” === My Love & Warmth to You & Yours, Jasper *
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Date: 7/29/2011 9:54:00 PM
nicely done love the first verse good luck in the contest. cory
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Date: 7/29/2011 9:31:00 PM
WoW! Excellent effort hee. I'm sure it will be a winner. Loved the imagery and the way you linked it all together. Good Stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/29/2011 7:04:00 PM
Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by and reading about Princess'Fortune Cookie..Sara
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Date: 7/29/2011 5:29:00 PM
encahted am i, jack.. winning wishes with biggg huggs, nette:)
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Date: 7/29/2011 5:13:00 PM
wonderful write....God bless...old Jack
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