An Empty Heart

an empty heart
the chocolates
all gone



Published in Bottle Rockets Press #46

AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Proxenos Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 10:32 AM
Hi Line, life is full contrasts as your clever few lines explain - the sweetness of life has gone as the heart is empty. Very sad. Take care Line. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 7:24 PM
Thanks, Jennifer. Much appreciated~
Krutsinger Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 9:28 PM
This took me by surprise and sweetened me up.
Gauthier Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 9:30 PM
lol ~ thanks for your visit, Caren
Sands Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 10:15 AM
Oh, the sweet feels gone. Well done Line. I hope your day goes ok :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 2:55 PM
Thanks, Heidi ~ warmest greetings going out to you
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