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An Empty Cocoon

Dignified dreams in a diminished home takes time though the dreams will come true with the tethered dreams and desires and the swirling unfurled emotions a cocoon, plays a rising tune gives the warmth of sun and calmness of moon paints a beautiful scene with a brush clean that exudes the green beyond the screen sings a song of hope offers a rope to climb the slope being granted the strength to fly to the weeping soul, high above the sky an empty cocoon grins there swaying in the air...

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Date: 3/11/2021 6:22:00 AM
WoW!Supraja, What a deep and well written poem. Good title, content, and imagery.Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/10/2021 9:15:00 PM
A lovely poem, this is Supraja.
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Date: 3/8/2021 1:13:00 PM
- When hope and love exist ... everything will be fine ... a lovely poem, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/8/2021 6:54:00 AM
A lovely way to look backwards and forward at the same time.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/8/2021 6:55:00 AM
This is good for Easter as well if one thinks of the Empty Tomb of Jesus.
Date: 3/8/2021 6:13:00 AM
So many emotions emanate from this write...hopes, dreams... splendidly done, Supraja.
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Date: 3/8/2021 6:05:00 AM
Would that all our dreams come true.
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Date: 3/8/2021 4:21:00 AM
Interesting lines penned. Given time and opportunity one can achieve their dreams with approached in the form of goals. Sara
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