An Edenic Rise

Bluebells are a symbol of humility, gratitude and constancy

A perfect day is not lackluster, nor lusting for more, but
rather knowing the plenitude in each sentient moment.
—Quote by Poet

An Edenic Rise

it’s perfect degrees
of sixty-one stimulates
a chirrup ‘cross screen
in pjs; my feet are bare
pedicured cerulian

better than Summer
and Winter’s too cold to bear
love perfect degrees
in slight chill of fahrenheit
add cup of Highlander Grogg

an Edenic rise
joyful sighs sans monotone
with cream in the cup
retiree with work to do
bluebells boon in afternoon
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Beaufort Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 10:59 AM
Kim, sounds very relaxing. There's nothing quite like perfect temperature to enjoy the surroundings. I hope you have many more days with sensations such as these. BTW, I hope I do too!!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 7:14 PM
Thank you! Yes, have a perfect Edenic day!
Hind Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 2:52 PM
Wise expressions, dear soul- I loved your quote, made me think, the whole poem made me think xx :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 5:06 PM
Thank you for sharing that with me. So glad you found the poem and quote thought-provoking!
One Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 11:37 AM
A lovely collection of tankas dear Ki.. nice imagery, especially in the second one..
Rodrigues Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 12:43 PM
Thank you, Silent! :)
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