Ann Gilmour Poet Rhyme

An Early Morning Feast

A shining bright star
shines down from afar
In this morning’s sky 
just before dawn

As it gleams in the East
like an early morning feast
Such a way to start a day
as it takes my breath away

I saw it from my balcony
a sparkling, twinkling sight to see
Then went inside to google it
this light that shone upon me 

Venus is the star 
in the sky that I saw 
Engulfing me with wonderment 
and filling me with awe

With the full moon coming soon
and the exquisite sun arising 
My spirit is on such a high
I feel I’m floating in the sky


18th November 2018 – after witnessing the beauty of Venus today…

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Sara Kendrick February 24, 2021 at 8:57 AM Congrats on this winner. Sara Ann Gilmour February 25, 2021 at 1:23 PM Many thanks Sara for your lovely congrats. I appreciate your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Constance La France February 23, 2021 at 3:13 PM Ann, very nice and congratulations on your win with this pretty poem _Constance Ann Gilmour February 25, 2021 at 1:22 PM Bless you dear Constance for your congratulations and sweet comment. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier February 23, 2021 at 6:37 AM Lovely poem, Ann ~ congrats on your well deserved win Ann Gilmour February 25, 2021 at 1:21 PM Thank you so much dear Line for your lovely comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

P.S. Awtry November 25, 2018 at 7:11 PM You captured so well the feeling of awe :) Ann Gilmour November 26, 2018 at 12:44 AM Thank you so much P.S. yes it really did fill me with awe, it was an unexpected joy to see. Kindest thoughts Ann x

Gordon Mcconnell November 22, 2018 at 10:22 AM Love it Ann, so well penned!, Great writing indeed. Have great day, Gordon Ann Gilmour November 23, 2018 at 9:02 AM Many thanks Gordon, I was truly inspired when seeing the brightness of Venus in the sky and had to write down my feelings. Thank you for your lovely comments Gordon and have a good weekend. Kindest thoughts Ann x

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 18, 2018 at 9:16 AM Love this :) am a Venus admirer myself. xomo Ann Gilmour November 18, 2018 at 10:02 AM Thank you Maureen, yes it was utterly stunning this morning and seemed so close! Kindest thoughts Ann x