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An Early Morning Feast

A shining bright star shines down from afar In this morning’s sky just before dawn As it gleams in the East like an early morning feast Such a way to start a day as it takes my breath away I saw it from my balcony a sparkling, twinkling sight to see Then went inside to google it this light that shone upon me Venus is the star in the sky that I saw Engulfing me with wonderment and filling me with awe With the full moon coming soon and the exquisite sun arising My spirit is on such a high I feel I’m floating in the sky 18th November 2018 – after witnessing the beauty of Venus today… Contest ALL YOURS FEB 23 Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Date: 2/24/2021 8:57:00 AM
Congrats on this winner. Sara
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/25/2021 1:23:00 PM
Many thanks Sara for your lovely congrats. I appreciate your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/23/2021 3:13:00 PM
Ann, very nice and congratulations on your win with this pretty poem _Constance
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Date: 2/25/2021 1:22:00 PM
Bless you dear Constance for your congratulations and sweet comment. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/23/2021 6:37:00 AM
Lovely poem, Ann ~ congrats on your well deserved win
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/25/2021 1:21:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Line for your lovely comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/25/2018 7:11:00 PM
You captured so well the feeling of awe :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/26/2018 12:44:00 AM
Thank you so much P.S. yes it really did fill me with awe, it was an unexpected joy to see. Kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 11/22/2018 10:22:00 AM
Love it Ann, so well penned!, Great writing indeed. Have great day, Gordon
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/23/2018 9:02:00 AM
Many thanks Gordon, I was truly inspired when seeing the brightness of Venus in the sky and had to write down my feelings. Thank you for your lovely comments Gordon and have a good weekend. Kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 11/18/2018 9:16:00 AM
Love this :) am a Venus admirer myself. xomo
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/18/2018 10:02:00 AM
Thank you Maureen, yes it was utterly stunning this morning and seemed so close! Kindest thoughts Ann x

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