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An Early Bird

an early bird a dew chilled worm daybreak tug-o-war 3/20/2021 Let’s Get Creative With Haiku Poetry Contest Constance LaFrance sponsor

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/26/2021 2:47:00 PM

Love the tug-o-war idea, John... Congrats on your win in the contest. Best always, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/26/2021 2:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Spring is on the way with your "Wonderful" early bird. Have a blessed day/weekend.............

Constance La France

Date: 3/24/2021 3:11:00 PM

John, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative with Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this excellent non traditional Haiku, well done_Constance

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/23/2021 2:32:00 PM

Good one! Congratulations!

Suzette Richards

Date: 3/23/2021 2:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win with this haiku rich in imagery :)) ~Sus

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/22/2021 7:17:00 PM

Dear John, a very clever and creative haiku. Great imagery. Congratulations for your excellent win in Constance's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/22/2021 4:12:00 PM

I love the image you depicted, John! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Jan Allison

Date: 3/22/2021 4:07:00 PM

This is SO clever John, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2021 2:08:00 PM

I think there may have been at least two early birds in on this one.Very cool, John. BIG congrats.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 3/22/2021 1:37:00 PM

Congratulation on your winning poem. Kind wishes, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/22/2021 12:28:00 PM

- Congratulations on your first place in the contest, lovely written John :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/22/2021 11:33:00 AM

Hi John, You nailed the challenge with this well-written and creative write. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Wendy Watson

Date: 3/22/2021 10:54:00 AM

You've conjured up such a brilliant image here, John. Very clever use of the minimal word count and a fun scenario to imagine. It made an instant impact on me!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 3/20/2021 6:13:00 AM

ooh I love it. Fave’n. Happy Spring! xomo