John Lawless Poet Haiku

An Early Bird

an early bird
                  a dew chilled
                                     worm
                                             daybreak 
                                                          tug-o-war

3/20/2021

Let’s Get Creative With Haiku Poetry Contest
Constance LaFrance sponsor

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Gershon Wolf March 26, 2021 at 2:47 PM Love the tug-o-war idea, John... Congrats on your win in the contest. Best always, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith March 26, 2021 at 2:31 PM Congratulations on your win. Spring is on the way with your "Wonderful" early bird. Have a blessed day/weekend.............

Constance La France March 24, 2021 at 3:11 PM John, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative with Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this excellent non traditional Haiku, well done_Constance

Juliet Ligon March 23, 2021 at 2:32 PM Good one! Congratulations!

Suzette Richards March 23, 2021 at 2:23 AM Congratulations on your top win with this haiku rich in imagery :)) ~Sus

Susan Ashley March 22, 2021 at 7:17 PM Dear John, a very clever and creative haiku. Great imagery. Congratulations for your excellent win in Constance's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Merryman March 22, 2021 at 4:12 PM I love the image you depicted, John! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Jan Allison March 22, 2021 at 4:07 PM This is SO clever John, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2021 at 2:08 PM I think there may have been at least two early birds in on this one.Very cool, John. BIG congrats.

Kai Michael Neumann March 22, 2021 at 1:37 PM Congratulation on your winning poem. Kind wishes, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen March 22, 2021 at 12:28 PM - Congratulations on your first place in the contest, lovely written John :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. March 22, 2021 at 11:33 AM Hi John, You nailed the challenge with this well-written and creative write. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Wendy Watson March 22, 2021 at 10:54 AM You've conjured up such a brilliant image here, John. Very clever use of the minimal word count and a fun scenario to imagine. It made an instant impact on me!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 20, 2021 at 6:13 AM ooh I love it. Fave’n. Happy Spring! xomo