An Eagle's Space Adventure

I see little humans playing around
I fly through the clouds to and fro
I fly on the top, to search for prey
I pounce on a rabbit on the go

Extremely high altitudes, I fly on
Everything below looks negligible
Today my leap was higher than ever
To touch the stars, see if it’s possible

My flight can’t feel the pressure today
What happened to the gravity? Where am I?
Everything looks different, lighter I feel
A strong bird I am, but have the urge to cry

A round sphere I see, blue and green
A little further away, is a small whitish thing
On the other side I see, rings around a sphere
No other birds, no sound, nor a blink

I thought I could touch the stars in the sky
Perhaps I went wrong, I can’t see any star
Instead the sun is bigger, shining crudely on me
I’m lost but I recall, there’s a planet called Mars

I fly towards it, to see if life exists
I’m gonna do something even humans haven’t yet
When I reach the planet, I alone will rule
Not that I don’t now, but then I’ll be King
And show all the humans, my regime…

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by Apoorva Patrikar
for the contest Deep Space Odyssey 
sponsored by Nathan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Deep Space" contest Apoorva. Love, Carol
Liwayway Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 11:34 PM
Congrats friend Apoorva for this very creative poem of yours. enjoyed reading and Congratulations!!!(^_^)
Squyres Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 5:19 PM
I like how the Eagle sought to be king !! Enjoyed your poem !! Congrats on your win!!
A   Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 4:23 PM
APOORVA, congratulations with your awesome poem in Nathan's "deep space" contest.. enjoyed~ xox~pd
Sweetheart Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 4:22 PM
SUPER CONGRATS APOORVA ON A MARVELOUS WRITE AND WIN FOR DEEP APACE ADVENTURE LUV ..
D. Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 3:48 PM
thanks for the support' nate
Devnath  Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 9:43 AM
Beautiful poem bearing nice imagination. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Grisetti Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 2:54 PM
A tremendous entry into the space race, er, contest.
Patrikar Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 6:41 AM
haha thankyou :)
Squyres Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 1:12 PM
Beautifully written....best of luck in the contest !!
Patrikar Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 6:41 AM
thankyou :)
Gasun Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 10:36 AM
You're such a great poet, too Apoorva!!! I'm glad to meet you here. Thanks for your congratulatory comments which inspire me more. I've read also some of your poems, this and the other latest ones. they are all wonderful and well-done. I will read more tomorrow. Good luck and best wishes to you always!!! :) hugs leonora
Patrikar Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 6:41 AM
thankyou :)
Horsman Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 8:16 AM
wonderful imagery, enjoyed this.
Patrikar Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 6:42 AM
thankyou :) harry
Pettit Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 11:45 PM
This is a very descriptive space journey. Nathan will like this.
Patrikar Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 6:42 AM
thankyou :) robert
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