An Eagle's Space Adventure

I see little humans playing around
I fly through the clouds to and fro
I fly on the top, to search for prey
I pounce on a rabbit on the go

Extremely high altitudes, I fly on
Everything below looks negligible
Today my leap was higher than ever
To touch the stars, see if it’s possible

My flight can’t feel the pressure today
What happened to the gravity? Where am I?
Everything looks different, lighter I feel
A strong bird I am, but have the urge to cry

A round sphere I see, blue and green
A little further away, is a small whitish thing
On the other side I see, rings around a sphere
No other birds, no sound, nor a blink

I thought I could touch the stars in the sky
Perhaps I went wrong, I can’t see any star
Instead the sun is bigger, shining crudely on me
I’m lost but I recall, there’s a planet called Mars

I fly towards it, to see if life exists
I’m gonna do something even humans haven’t yet
When I reach the planet, I alone will rule
Not that I don’t now, but then I’ll be King
And show all the humans, my regime…

---
by Apoorva Patrikar
for the contest Deep Space Odyssey 
sponsored by Nathan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/8/2012 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Deep Space" contest Apoorva. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 10/5/2012 11:34:00 PM
Congrats friend Apoorva for this very creative poem of yours. enjoyed reading and Congratulations!!!(^_^)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/5/2012 5:19:00 PM
I like how the Eagle sought to be king !! Enjoyed your poem !! Congrats on your win!!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/5/2012 4:23:00 PM
APOORVA, congratulations with your awesome poem in Nathan's "deep space" contest.. enjoyed~ xox~pd
Login to Reply
Date: 10/5/2012 4:22:00 PM
SUPER CONGRATS APOORVA ON A MARVELOUS WRITE AND WIN FOR DEEP APACE ADVENTURE LUV ..
Login to Reply
Date: 10/5/2012 3:48:00 PM
thanks for the support' nate
Login to Reply
Date: 9/10/2012 9:43:00 AM
Beautiful poem bearing nice imagination. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Login to Reply
Date: 9/5/2012 2:54:00 PM
A tremendous entry into the space race, er, contest.
Login to Reply
Patrikar Avatar
Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:41:00 AM
haha thankyou :)
Date: 9/5/2012 1:12:00 PM
Beautifully written....best of luck in the contest !!
Login to Reply
Patrikar Avatar
Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:41:00 AM
thankyou :)
Date: 9/5/2012 10:36:00 AM
You're such a great poet, too Apoorva!!! I'm glad to meet you here. Thanks for your congratulatory comments which inspire me more. I've read also some of your poems, this and the other latest ones. they are all wonderful and well-done. I will read more tomorrow. Good luck and best wishes to you always!!! :) hugs leonora
Login to Reply
Patrikar Avatar
Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:41:00 AM
thankyou :)
Date: 9/5/2012 8:16:00 AM
wonderful imagery, enjoyed this.
Login to Reply
Patrikar Avatar
Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:42:00 AM
thankyou :) harry
Date: 9/4/2012 11:45:00 PM
This is a very descriptive space journey. Nathan will like this.
Login to Reply
Patrikar Avatar
Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:42:00 AM
thankyou :) robert
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter