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An Eagle's Space Adventure

I see little humans playing around I fly through the clouds to and fro I fly on the top, to search for prey I pounce on a rabbit on the go Extremely high altitudes, I fly on Everything below looks negligible Today my leap was higher than ever To touch the stars, see if it’s possible My flight can’t feel the pressure today What happened to the gravity? Where am I? Everything looks different, lighter I feel A strong bird I am, but have the urge to cry A round sphere I see, blue and green A little further away, is a small whitish thing On the other side I see, rings around a sphere No other birds, no sound, nor a blink I thought I could touch the stars in the sky Perhaps I went wrong, I can’t see any star Instead the sun is bigger, shining crudely on me I’m lost but I recall, there’s a planet called Mars I fly towards it, to see if life exists I’m gonna do something even humans haven’t yet When I reach the planet, I alone will rule Not that I don’t now, but then I’ll be King And show all the humans, my regime… --- by Apoorva Patrikar for the contest Deep Space Odyssey sponsored by Nathan

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Date: 10/8/2012 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Deep Space" contest Apoorva. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2012 11:34:00 PM
Congrats friend Apoorva for this very creative poem of yours. enjoyed reading and Congratulations!!!(^_^)
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Date: 10/5/2012 5:19:00 PM
I like how the Eagle sought to be king !! Enjoyed your poem !! Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:23:00 PM
APOORVA, congratulations with your awesome poem in Nathan's "deep space" contest.. enjoyed~ xox~pd
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:22:00 PM
SUPER CONGRATS APOORVA ON A MARVELOUS WRITE AND WIN FOR DEEP APACE ADVENTURE LUV ..
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Date: 10/5/2012 3:48:00 PM
thanks for the support' nate
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Date: 9/10/2012 9:43:00 AM
Beautiful poem bearing nice imagination. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/5/2012 2:54:00 PM
A tremendous entry into the space race, er, contest.
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:41:00 AM
haha thankyou :)
Date: 9/5/2012 1:12:00 PM
Beautifully written....best of luck in the contest !!
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:41:00 AM
thankyou :)
Date: 9/5/2012 10:36:00 AM
You're such a great poet, too Apoorva!!! I'm glad to meet you here. Thanks for your congratulatory comments which inspire me more. I've read also some of your poems, this and the other latest ones. they are all wonderful and well-done. I will read more tomorrow. Good luck and best wishes to you always!!! :) hugs leonora
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:41:00 AM
thankyou :)
Date: 9/5/2012 8:16:00 AM
wonderful imagery, enjoyed this.
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:42:00 AM
thankyou :) harry
Date: 9/4/2012 11:45:00 PM
This is a very descriptive space journey. Nathan will like this.
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:42:00 AM
thankyou :) robert

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