An Autumnal Beauty

October, the month of cooling breezes
and adorn,
this morn-
my daughter said, “The tree cutters will
be here.”
Just as soon as she spoke they appeared,
my being aged shuffling to the table
with my coffee,
through the sunroom window I did see,
a lithe and handsome workman-
long dark ponytail scaling a tree
with ease.
Suddenly it seemed a Pavarotti aria
resounded through the turning leaves.

Well, this old biddie wished I was in
my twenties again,
when the thought of golden years
was foreign.
Yes, I love watching the backyard
birds and such,
but the autumnal beauty of him
enchanted me much.

My daughter and I laughed,
because I’m really quite daft,
I felt the need to return to my
morning prayers,
I’m sixty-eight and I
don’t dare,
to think too much as if a youth-
but, now and then,
it’s delightful to gaze at comely
young men!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ashley Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 8:34 AM
Dearest Regina, sweet poet friend, I enjoyed the light-hearted imagery and humor of your aging poem. The poetess may be an "old biddie" (me too.. lol) but your delightful golden pen is as young and nimble as ever :) ! An enchanting piece! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Elliott Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 5:44 AM
Dearest poetry friend, thank you for your thoughtful review. I love to have a sense of humor about aging and also sweet memories of youth. Us older folks have that kinship. May your upcoming October weekend be inspirational and splendid. God’s harvest blessings to you & your family.
Wolf Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 8:24 PM
This was really quite a switcheroo for you, Regina!... Though I rate it "refreshingly honest and 'giggly-cute.'" Thanks for the smiles. :) gw
Wolf Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 8:38 PM
'Ageing with humor. I like that -- the only way to go --- no, no, no: I mean, the only way to stay. Here' to life. L'chaim!
Elliott Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 12:28 PM
Hi Gershon, glad you liked my aging with humor poem, lol! I had fun penning it. Some of my poems are sad so I thought of this funny one. Shabbat Shalom, good friend.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 5:47 PM
I can relate, Regina. This 70-year old 'biddie' sometimes casually gawks at those autumnal beauties. Enjoyed this poem...brightened my day, hugs, Sara
Elliott Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 1:57 PM
Hi Sara, thank you for reading my humor light verse poem. When I’m joking around I call myself an old biddie, lol! I really smiled at your review of it. My daughter and I had such a good laugh! Hugs xox
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