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An Autumn Muse

Leaves in shades of red and gold Magnificent to see But since they only last one year I'd rather be a tree

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/2/2011 7:06:00 PM
did you mean that leaves only last a season? the "year" is throwing me off here. i'm not sure I understand, except the overall general concept that the leaves lives are fleeting, whereas trees live for many years.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/2/2011 7:19:00 PM
Yup. In my poem year equals season. You figured it out. Thanks for stopping by Susan
Date: 10/1/2011 12:54:00 PM
A nice season poem..........George
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/1/2011 1:46:00 PM
Thanks George
Date: 10/1/2011 12:17:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem this morning. God Bless Phyl
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/1/2011 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Phyl
Date: 9/30/2011 12:19:00 AM
I think so too, tis the life of the tree for me!(I think weeping willow would be nice to be!)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/1/2011 1:49:00 PM
And if a willow were out of the question. Do you have another suggestion? Or does a willow it have to be Are you hung up on that damned tree?
Date: 9/29/2011 2:57:00 PM
Cute, Bob. Love this. Kim
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/1/2011 1:49:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 9/29/2011 12:20:00 PM
can I join you BOB,, i bet they live gracefully when left alone,,, have a sweet one,..p.d.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/29/2011 12:41:00 PM
Absolutely, you can join me. You can be the "poet" tree:)

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