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An Autumn Love

Sometimes love is a whisper in your ear A secrete sweet word when he or she is near Sometimes it is absent then it reappears Painting possibilities and bringing good cheer How can I not know and know same time No matter my opinion he stays on my mind I tried to sweep it like it was dust But it settles in neatly unlike lust He is strong and I am weak We are a strong possibility Of love in autumn in a falling dream How could I miss that he loves me My heart hurts because his did This can work seal with kiss I’ve been confused waiting for fairy tell I have to choose and live life well

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2024 2:25:00 PM

Sweet and unique way to do autumn whispers.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/31/2024 3:06:00 PM

Thank you for reading Andrea!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/29/2024 11:43:00 AM

Dear Karen, I loved how you conveyed a message of Autumn hope and choice. The great hope is that there is always a possibility of love, despite initial confusion and attempts to ignore our feelings. Yes, a world of love, forgiveness, and reconciliation. I always love reading your well inked words. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Karen Jones
Date: 8/29/2024 12:15:00 PM

Daniel you are kind thank you!

Marugu Mo

Date: 8/28/2024 9:33:00 AM

"we are a strong possibility.." got me thinking...enjoyed

Karen Jones
Date: 8/28/2024 9:44:00 AM

Thanks for reading Marugu!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/28/2024 7:35:00 AM

Crunchy leaves, shorter days, and love blooms like spring. A enjoy this romantic autumn poem.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/28/2024 8:01:00 AM

Hugs happy you like it Hilda!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/27/2024 11:41:00 AM

This is beautifully penned. Karen! I have been I in love many times It’s totally ~an awesome adventure. Choose to love the right person! And those days will shine for you. By right, I mean a person who lets you be you! Not to their idea of who you shoul be.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/27/2024 12:00:00 PM

So glad you like it. Thank you for your thoughtful advice Pangie! I will keep this in mind! Hugs