An Autumn Love

Sometimes love is a whisper in your ear
A secrete sweet word when he or she is near
Sometimes it is absent then it reappears 
Painting possibilities and bringing good cheer

How can I not know and know same time
No matter my opinion he stays on my mind
I tried to sweep it like it was dust
But it settles in neatly unlike lust

He is strong and I am weak
We are a strong possibility 
Of love in autumn in a falling dream
How could I miss that he loves me

My heart hurts because his did
This can work seal with kiss
I’ve been confused waiting for fairy tell 
I have to choose and live life well
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 2:25 PM
Sweet and unique way to do autumn whispers.
Jones Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 3:06 PM
Thank you for reading Andrea!
Rodgers Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 11:43 AM
Dear Karen, I loved how you conveyed a message of Autumn hope and choice. The great hope is that there is always a possibility of love, despite initial confusion and attempts to ignore our feelings. Yes, a world of love, forgiveness, and reconciliation. I always love reading your well inked words. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Jones Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 12:15 PM
Daniel you are kind thank you!
Mo Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 9:33 AM
"we are a strong possibility.." got me thinking...enjoyed
Jones Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 9:44 AM
Thanks for reading Marugu!
Greenhough Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 7:35 AM
Crunchy leaves, shorter days, and love blooms like spring. A enjoy this romantic autumn poem.
Jones Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 8:01 AM
Hugs happy you like it Hilda!
Romios Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 11:41 AM
This is beautifully penned. Karen! I have been I in love many times It’s totally ~an awesome adventure. Choose to love the right person! And those days will shine for you. By right, I mean a person who lets you be you! Not to their idea of who you shoul be.
Jones Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 12:00 PM
So glad you like it. Thank you for your thoughtful advice Pangie! I will keep this in mind! Hugs
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