An Aunties Wedding

An Aunties Wedding

There was an empty Players box 
flattened beneath the dancers
a scent of receding tide on the quay
swept, green, slick as hair oil 
bound by ginger sideburns
your dress shaped like a rocket to the moon
a wigwam to play in days before the day
I was five in a white wool suit
bony kneed refused to board her train
or travel the cold tiled floor
to her shining altar
I bet she never noticed the tramps outside the door
or your sisters child that day
now you are chatteringly old – still unhappy
I met you last Saturday
a little boy from nineteen sixty four
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Molloy Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 2:45 AM
thanks for the comment. Feel like it was one of those pieces that imposed itself on me
Ashford Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 7:58 AM
Very cool poem with lots of contextual and observational points. Well crafted piece.
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