"an Attempt To Write"

I see
 people
but i can't see
myself
i see
parts of their
pain
and mine is
almost the 
same
I think
life isn't
sane
we're all
just 
a bunch of
grain
making
this whole world
rain
leaving, all that remains
one droplet of
our souls behind
A memory of us
 that falls onto one 
long line
embedded and weaved
out from time
seeking a new life
burning up minds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 5, 2010 at 9:00 PM
I think the same thing some times, but not nearly as poetically as you. This is really amazing.
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