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An Artist's visit

For Sara Jama's contest "Emotional Shrapnel" 05/10/2025 she appears spontaneously courtesy asunder an uninvited visitor behind her a seeping of rust at the gates an artist with barren hands splashing scarlet all over the hessian a lurid migration, primordial as fossils, sketched by Selene’s soft summoning into the earth’s belly, with feeble niggles, surging to tremor crescendos abrading, grinding, scraping in the moulded wisdom of the womb where a design is deferred a cradle lies still….

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Date: 5/10/2025 5:53:00 AM
This feels like really good poetry but I've read it a few times and just can't quite catch on. Who is she? What's her agenda?
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Sean Kibble
Date: 5/11/2025 3:55:00 PM
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Sean Kibble
Date: 5/11/2025 3:25:00 AM
As much as I would like to tell you - it will spoil the fun and it will be a miscarriage.

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