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9/11/2026 for The Power of Fiction Poetry Contest sponsored by Natasha L Scragg

 

An Appreciation of The Yearling

“Somewhere beyond the sink-hole, past the magnolia, under the live oaks, a boy and a yearling ran side by side, and were gone forever.” ~ The final sentence of The Yearling by Marjorie Kinnan Rawlings.

A child was gone forever…
Was I, too, once a child?
Would it be that never,  
I’d again run free and wild?
 
Would I simply pass away
like little Fodder-wing,
not to see another day
where I might fly or sing?
 
Lately, I’ve been thinking of
a brand-new hopeful dawn,
and the feel of earnest love -
of Jody and his fawn.
 
I saw a waterwheel, saw a rabbit,
took more than just a look.
Another’s soul, I’d inhabit
in the chapters of a book.
 
Lost forever to the ages,
a long, forgotten “when” -
four hundred thirty pages
gave me childhood again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Borg Avatar
September 26, 2026 at 8:03 PM
It's so wonderful when a poem reminds you and does not let you forget of something you appreciated in the past. Thanks David for doing so and in rhyme, to boot.
Crandall Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 12:33 PM
Thanks for the wonderful compliment, Pascal!
Godwin Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 5:24 PM
WOW, back to back touching poems. Me thinks you wish me to cry. That book sure did. When it comes to beautiful poems, your pen is batting them out of the park, CayCay
Crandall Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 9:49 PM
Thanks, CayCay! I'm partial to that book, too, and I like this poem. 😊
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 4:11 PM
it's a great book; haven't read it in years....maybe I should do so again.
Crandall Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 5:33 PM
I've only read it once, only a few years ago!
Wolf Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 8:23 PM
One of my absolute all-time favorite books. Why, o why, don't they write this kind of stuff anymore?! Kids crave it --- and not 'Queer Classmates on Quaaludes' and such tripe that's published today. ~ gw
Crandall Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 7:17 AM
Thanks, yes, it's a great book. Maybe I'm being a bit too serious, but I applaud books that champion acceptance of diversity, and while I don't know of any that encourage drug use, it's a part of life, and I'm not in favor of ignoring those things. But, yeah, it's nice to have a book that focuses on beautiful things as opposed to the ugliness of what drugs can do. Yet, as I think, The Yearling doesn't at all shy away at the harshness of reality (consider Fodderwing's death). You've made me think - and THAT is an accomplishment!
Kendrick Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 4:46 AM
Nice tribute to the book and the writer of that book. I enjoyed reading it. It seems like I might have seen a movie based on that book, but it was a long, long time ago. Way to go with this one. 👏✍️. Sara K.
Crandall Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 6:52 PM
Thanks, Sara! I saw the movie about 20 years ago and read the book about 2 years ago, give or take. I loved both. It's funny. There's an aspect to the book that I usually don't like - lengthly detailed descriptions of the flora. Yet, even though I didn't know all those plants, I could feel how the author was in love with the native Florida plant life, and how it made a great environment for the boy. Apparently, the author wrote about the scenery she knew so well from her childhood.
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 10:49 PM
This is fantastic. A big fave for me. Everything poetry should be is right here. Readability and relatability wrapped up well with rhythm and rhyme 👏
Crandall Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 6:48 PM
Thanks, Andrea! I'm glad you liked it. It's my favorite of my recent poems, maybe, partly because I liked the book!
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