An Apple a Day

An Apple A Day

For Health Shall We Pray, Today

Eve’s Love, An Apple
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hero Aka Hero-Wilson Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 11:05 AM
Love this Congrats on being featured Rhonda Hero
Fisher Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 4:08 AM
the forbidden fruit of eves love. i liked this well structured poem.
Mason Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 4:10 PM
Great use of the 5-7-5 form here, Molly and a very well-deserved selection to be featured this week here at the Soup! Congratulations and I look forward to reading more wonderful writes from you!!
Hero Aka Hero-Wilson Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 10:25 AM
Congrats on being featured. Rhonda
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 3:49 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Molly. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
Adeite Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 12:04 PM
Congrats Molly, on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! wonderful Haiku. Keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke
Sweetheart Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 11:35 AM
Congrats Molly on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA
Fisher Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 7:48 AM
Many congrats on your feature and win in Johns contest. Rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 7:02 AM
Congratulations Molly on your win in John Freeman's contest "Redneck Psalms,Improve Human Foible". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 5:50 AM
Congrats Molly on your winning poem in the Redneck Psalms contest with these awesome words and wise advice ..enjoy your big win..with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii...
Mehta Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 12:14 AM
Congrats for the 2nd place win
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 11:39 PM
congratulations on your winning senryu, Molly!
Johnson Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 10:47 PM
Great senryu and saying. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Conway Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 1:58 PM
Good Luck Molly, Great senryu!~Tirzah~
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June 30, 2010 at 10:27 AM
Ah, I really like the twist in the last line, Molly. Great senryu and best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 8:23 AM
Quite a new thought
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