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An Appetite Touched

Kisses like candy One leads to anoher one A sweet sugar rush Tasting with my hands Breathing in all swallowed An appetite I touched

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Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/5/2012 8:23:00 AM

Wow, a very sensual and grace senryus Michael. I LOVE this one a lot!

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 6/5/2012 2:40:00 AM

I love the rhythm and message here!!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/4/2012 10:49:00 AM

Oh woozy--- sugar rush indeed! Methinks you should be MTS (Michael the Sweet) heehee and oh shucks, don't be MTE -- you want to know the secret? No need to bribe me at all ;)...All you have to do is ask ;) I'd definitely enjoy writing with you :) send some lines my way and I will try my best :) -- btw ohh I love Missy's reply-- yummy mummy indeed ;) hugs back to you, MTS :D

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/3/2012 10:00:00 AM

Why do I feel the need to say yummy mummy?? hehe, enjoyed this MJF, but you knew we would didn't you? hope your weekend is a brilliant one especially with this write, inspiration had to come from somewhere hey? love & hugs CTH

James Peranteau

Date: 6/3/2012 7:02:00 AM

Hands off sir ! *smiles* Awesome write dear poet ! Have a wonderful day Michael....much love, james

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/2/2012 8:39:00 PM

Yowza! What's up with all the romance poems this evening?...I should be reading these with my hubby...You haven't posted something in 4 whole days and now look what a great senryu u wrote! Nice. Gwendolen

Alex Mckenna

Date: 6/2/2012 7:48:00 PM

Wonderful! Just to let you know, World Poetry Movement informed me that the poem I entered in their contest passed to the Finals, and that they want to publish it in "Stars In Our Hearts" which will be published in August! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/2/2012 3:57:00 PM

you sure know how to motivate all the 5 senses at once,..pd

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/2/2012 3:56:00 PM

wow, Talk about taste,, I have a big feeling about this one, I'm gonna leave it at that. And thanks for the hugs.. I did a oopsy yesterday,, he he.. xox.._pd,

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2012 3:34:00 PM

I love this imagery. Love candy too!! Michael, I already commented and I went back to your site and made another comment hoping it would allow me to see poets who had commented to you. Are my comments even going thru? I don't see how to see others' comments, but other than that, i enjoyed your site.

David Williams

Date: 6/2/2012 12:11:00 PM

wow, Michael, Like this a lot, well done my friend...David

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/2/2012 9:45:00 AM

What a fantastic, incredible write my friend! I really enjoyed the sweet as sugar stanza that you wrote! Beautifully written Michael! Great Work!!

Justcallme Britt

Date: 6/2/2012 9:13:00 AM

oh yea this is lovely! I nodded my head and smiled after the first stanza <3