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An Annoyance

Feel like an annoyance every damn day Now old and crotchety, a teener should've stayed Young, brash and chipper Was this sweet wee nipper Now a stumbling old retard needing constant aid

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/2/2018 8:49:00 AM
Awww, but charming you will always be ;) Good morning hugs my sweet crotchety friend <3 xomo
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/2/2018 8:58:00 AM
LOL... aww, so you still love me! Phew! "Crotchety"... are you referring to my lower regions??? Mine are actually quite outstanding!!! If you'd like, I'll send you a pic!!! Love and hugs and kisses!!! Happy Big Crotch Jack XOXOX
Date: 11/2/2018 8:44:00 AM
Maybe some sunshine and a few coconuts might do the trick...All the best Jack
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/2/2018 9:00:00 AM
I have large coconuts... but sunshine always makes me smile!!!
Date: 11/2/2018 6:54:00 AM
Aghh but with age comes wisdom.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/2/2018 7:01:00 AM
Methinks I reached my capacity many many years ago! LOL

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