An Angel's Teardrop

My lazy muse went wandering around
When fallen into my knees, I astound
A cute lady like a coloured teardrop
Fallen from heaven an angel's eye drop.

She sat silent on my lap, I wonder
Shy or timid, what her cute mind thunder
In bright red attire with black beauty spots
An angel's love blot, my muse I forgot.

O lady, from the Garden of Eden
Did you come with a tweet from the heaven?
Or to tie my naughty mind on his seat
And to teach me to taste nature at least.

While my thoughts fly far away to the sky
Tiny wings blossoms, ladybird soars high.



Second Place in STRAND CHOICE W,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand
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Rodrigues Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 6:43 AM
A unique write! In bright red attire with black beauty spots/An angel's love blot, my muse I forgot.
Somadas Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 7:30 AM
Thank you Kim for your kind words.. Takecare ..
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 5:03 PM
This is "cute as a bug" Have you heard that expression? And when i think of a cute bug, THIS is the insect that comes right to my mind. The sweetest insect there is (next to the butterfly!!)
Somadas Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 11:38 PM
True Andrea.. They are cute little insects.. But I'm actually afraid of them.. Thank you..
B. Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 10:20 AM
An absolute glorious write, Jenish.. Really enjoyed this gem, my friend.. Flowed so lovely, I didn't want it to end.. Many blessings and stay safe!
Somadas Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 10:49 AM
Thank you Robertina for your kind words.. I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it.. Takecare..
Soni Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 12:05 AM
Lovely poem and a most beautiful title which pulled me towards it.My favourite.Rashi
Somadas Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 12:33 AM
Thank you Rashi for the delightful words and the fave..Takecare..
Sands Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 12:59 PM
Oh, I love this. A favorite for me. Well written.! :)
Somadas Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 10:33 PM
Thank you Heidi for your delightful words and the fave..Stay safe..
Michael Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 9:28 AM
Nice one...enjoyed it
Somadas Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 10:31 PM
Thank you Arturo..
Trifiatis Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 8:38 AM
Delightful writing dearest, Jenish! Hugs xxx Take care my friend.
Somadas Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 8:57 AM
Thank you for your support dear Demetrios.. Stay safe..
Pandit Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 7:12 AM
Enjoyed the read, Jenish--your ode to ladybird.
Somadas Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 7:55 AM
Thank you Vijay..
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