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An Angel's Teardrop

My lazy muse went wandering around When fallen into my knees, I astound A cute lady like a coloured teardrop Fallen from heaven an angel's eye drop. She sat silent on my lap, I wonder Shy or timid, what her cute mind thunder In bright red attire with black beauty spots An angel's love blot, my muse I forgot. O lady, from the Garden of Eden Did you come with a tweet from the heaven? Or to tie my naughty mind on his seat And to teach me to taste nature at least. While my thoughts fly far away to the sky Tiny wings blossoms, ladybird soars high. Second Place in STRAND CHOICE W,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 4/3/2020 6:43:00 AM
A unique write! In bright red attire with black beauty spots/An angel's love blot, my muse I forgot.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/3/2020 7:30:00 AM
Thank you Kim for your kind words.. Takecare ..
Date: 4/2/2020 5:03:00 PM
This is "cute as a bug" Have you heard that expression? And when i think of a cute bug, THIS is the insect that comes right to my mind. The sweetest insect there is (next to the butterfly!!)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/2/2020 11:38:00 PM
True Andrea.. They are cute little insects.. But I'm actually afraid of them.. Thank you..
Date: 4/2/2020 10:20:00 AM
An absolute glorious write, Jenish.. Really enjoyed this gem, my friend.. Flowed so lovely, I didn't want it to end.. Many blessings and stay safe!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/2/2020 10:49:00 AM
Thank you Robertina for your kind words.. I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it.. Takecare..
Date: 4/2/2020 12:05:00 AM
Lovely poem and a most beautiful title which pulled me towards it.My favourite.Rashi
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/2/2020 12:33:00 AM
Thank you Rashi for the delightful words and the fave..Takecare..
Date: 4/1/2020 2:37:00 PM
Beautiful poem! A fave for me. Stunning imagery. Chantelle hugs
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/1/2020 10:35:00 PM
Your delightful comment made my day.. Thanks for the fave.. Takecare..
Date: 4/1/2020 12:59:00 PM
Oh, I love this. A favorite for me. Well written.! :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/1/2020 10:33:00 PM
Thank you Heidi for your delightful words and the fave..Stay safe..
Date: 4/1/2020 9:28:00 AM
Nice one...enjoyed it
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/1/2020 10:31:00 PM
Thank you Arturo..
Date: 4/1/2020 8:38:00 AM
Delightful writing dearest, Jenish! Hugs xxx Take care my friend.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/1/2020 8:57:00 AM
Thank you for your support dear Demetrios.. Stay safe..
Date: 4/1/2020 7:12:00 AM
Enjoyed the read, Jenish--your ode to ladybird.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/1/2020 7:55:00 AM
Thank you Vijay..