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The rispetto lyric is generally composed of eight hendecasyllabic (11-syllable) lines. The rhyme scheme was usually abababcc , but ababccdd is now more prominent.

        

An Angel sent by God best describes my mum; a more loving soul has never walked this Earth. Mum would bottle preserves: apple, peach, or plum; cultivate my pride, and shore up my self-worth. And she could knit, crochet, macramé, and sew, learning each without help; she took life in tow. I felt comfortable and safe around her; now, when I think of her, my tears start to stir.

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Date: 3/29/2024 12:33:00 PM
Emile: This such a beautiful remembrance of your Mum. She would be happy you remember her this way. SuZ
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/29/2024 1:07:00 PM
Thank you Suzanne, what a nice thing to say, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/10/2024 8:53:00 AM
I always wish everyone would feel the angelic side of a mother, I do feel sad when some do not.. your poem described angelic features of a mum, so beautifully.. It is Mother's Day here in the UK, so I thought it would be nice to feature mum related poems.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/10/2024 9:03:00 AM
Thanks Silent One, I welcome and appreciate your comments, and the placement in your contest, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/10/2024 5:26:00 AM
This is so sweet and soulful dear Emile. I really admire your love and appreciation for your mum. Especially love how youv described her with lines such as “cultivate my pride, and shore up my self-worth. And she would knit, crochet, macramé, and sew,” talented and a kind mum i see through your words. I love this form and you’ve written a seamless one. Pleasure reading your work.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/10/2024 9:02:00 AM
Thanks Ink Empress, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/9/2024 1:18:00 AM
This fosters a deeply moving, reminiscent and loving poem, crafted with great form. I'm sure some of your mum's natural tow and ear for creativity has well and truly embroidered into you as well. Warm wishes, Lottie
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/9/2024 11:53:00 AM
Thanks Charlotte, I like to think you're right; I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/8/2024 2:10:00 PM
wasn't familiar with the Rispetto form until I read your lovely poem. I like this form and hope to try it in the near future.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/8/2024 3:52:00 PM
Thanks Sara, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/7/2024 9:01:00 AM
Dear Emile, your Rispetto is filled with admiration and love expressed from the deep well of tender beauty that surrounds your heart in memory of your amazing mum. Vivid, heartfelt and poignant verse, your last line really hits home. Your golden pen shines in the reflection of your tears. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/7/2024 9:43:00 AM
Thanks Susan, you know how to create a smile with your words, and I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/2/2024 3:40:00 PM
Hello0 Emile, It is normal to miss your mom. i miss my mom. You know Emile, our mothers are with us in spirit. . My friend. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/3/2024 10:35:00 AM
Hello Emile, Always nice to read your poetry. My friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene/
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/2/2024 4:29:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene, It's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, have a good day, Emile.

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