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An Angel In My Story

There was an angel in my story,
And that was my moment of glory..

The way her eyes shine when she make a smile, 
blows me away say a mile..

That moment when she wets her lips with her tongue end,   
I could get many poems penned..    

Her lips that appear like a orange slice,                                              
Cuts my body into thrice ..     

Nevertheless, I failed to make her as my wife,
Convincing my mind that she is just a chapter in my life...   

My brain knows that she is just an illusion,                            
All my heart needs is an elusion..

Let me focus on those things that shape my future,        
Such that I would achieve my life goal before my departure!......

There was an angel in my story,
And that was my moment of glory....

                                                          -Madhivanan.

Elusion-Escape, Departure-death

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Laura Leiser Date: 7/27/2016 5:44:00 PM This poem is very creative and unique, Madhivanan! I liked it alot! Welcome to Poetry Soup, and thanks for commenting on my recent poem :) Login to Reply Madhivanan Ganesan Date: 8/4/2016 11:16:00 AM Hi Laura, Thank you for your motivating words :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/16/2016 12:17:00 AM Madhivanan Ganesan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply Madhivanan Ganesan Date: 7/17/2016 11:50:00 AM Hello! I will be reading all your poems too. Thank you my poet friend!

Skat A Date: 7/15/2016 4:05:00 AM Madhivanan, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT* Login to Reply Madhivanan Ganesan Date: 7/17/2016 11:57:00 AM Hello, I felt good on reading your comment. Thank you very much.