An Angel In Disguise

Water rushing through the brook
leaving drowned out laughter
and a blooming lilypad

A mother with a weary look
as she wades through, feet clad
It’s her children she’s looking after

Hair threatens to fall in her distant eyes
She remembers when she hadn’t worried
stealing kisses under barnyard roofs

She begins to chastise
“Children put on your boots”
She raised the voice, and they scurried

But inside she was grinning ear to ear
Thinking of sweet-smelling memories
and grass-stained linen

As her children crawled near
She said, “Now listen,
I must share some stories…”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Canada Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Raw love- great story
Shaw Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 1:49 PM
Congratulations on your win Mckenzie for this delightful poem! Hugs, Kimberly
Roper Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 7:06 PM
Congratulations on your win a seven on this wonderful poem. Blessings eve
Boyer Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 7:24 PM
Thank you Eve!
A  Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 2:16 PM
MCKENZIE, CONGRATS on your win. **SKAT **
Boyer Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 7:25 PM
Thanks!
A   Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 2:07 PM
Mckenzie, Congratulations in Isaiah, Angel in a disguise contest...... Luv ~LINDA~
Allison Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 1:14 PM
Such delightful imagery Mckenzie many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Boyer Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 7:25 PM
Thank you! Hug from me too (:
A   Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 11:30 PM
Mckenzie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
Boyer Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 7:26 PM
Thank you so much! Sorry it took me awhile to respond my internet has been a little out of it as of late.
A  Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 7:12 PM
Mckenzie, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Boyer Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 7:23 PM
Thank you so much! Sorry it took me awhile to respond my internet has been a little out of it as of late.
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