Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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An Angel In Disguise

The snow of winter has melted
Spring's warmth a golden touch
Freedom at the creek with the wash
Only through love can hurt be lifted
And if fear didn't flow awash 
Of those many harsh words and such

A pensive mood her expression 
Deep in thought 'bout her plight
Just a shadow of his presence
Gave her whole being oppression
But this creek her pleasance
A wild garden space a delight

The rhythm of the water's sound
A coolness of the rush
Bare feet being cleansed and massaged
Free space, quiet, thoughts being drowned
Negative being barraged
Babbling and chirping help to shush

Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst
Contest: An Angel In Disguise
8,6,8,6 syllable count sort of...
Written: February 6, 2015

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Kim Shaw March 21, 2015 at 1:53 PM Congratulations on your win, Sara! Sad and ultimately uplifting. Lovely to read. Hugs, Kimberly

Richard Lamoureux March 21, 2015 at 8:42 AM Well done Sara, congratulations.

Eve Roper March 20, 2015 at 7:08 PM Congratulations on your win and a seven. Blessings dear friend Eve

Sandra Haight March 20, 2015 at 4:01 PM Beautiful, Sara. I like your poetic interpretation of the visual. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Skat A March 20, 2015 at 2:16 PM SARA, CONGRATS on your win. **SKAT **

Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2015 at 2:07 PM Sara, Congratulations in Isaiah, Angel in a disguise contest...... Luv ~LINDA~

Jan Allison March 20, 2015 at 1:15 PM Dropping back to congratulate you on your win Sara :-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 6, 2015 at 4:31 PM Tranquil imagery fills the lines Sara... beautiful!!! :)'- olive eloisa

Constance La France February 6, 2015 at 2:32 PM Sara, your poem is enchanting and winsome and captured the feeling of the accompanying picture, well done and best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~

Anne-Lise Andresen February 6, 2015 at 1:57 PM - A poem to enjoy Sara, beautiful! - I wish you a great weekend - // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison February 6, 2015 at 11:42 AM Such peaceful tranquil imagery - this is absolutely delightful Sara - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx