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The snow of winter has melted Spring's warmth a golden touch Freedom at the creek with the wash Only through love can hurt be lifted And if fear didn't flow awash Of those many harsh words and such A pensive mood her expression Deep in thought 'bout her plight Just a shadow of his presence Gave her whole being oppression But this creek her pleasance A wild garden space a delight The rhythm of the water's sound A coolness of the rush Bare feet being cleansed and massaged Free space, quiet, thoughts being drowned Negative being barraged Babbling and chirping help to shush Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst Contest: An Angel In Disguise 8,6,8,6 syllable count sort of... Written: February 6, 2015

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Date: 3/21/2015 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sara! Sad and ultimately uplifting. Lovely to read. Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 3/21/2015 8:42:00 AM
Well done Sara, congratulations.
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Date: 3/20/2015 7:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and a seven. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 3/20/2015 4:01:00 PM
Beautiful, Sara. I like your poetic interpretation of the visual. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/20/2015 2:16:00 PM
SARA, CONGRATS on your win. **SKAT **
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Date: 3/20/2015 2:07:00 PM
Sara, Congratulations in Isaiah, Angel in a disguise contest...... Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/20/2015 1:15:00 PM
Dropping back to congratulate you on your win Sara :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/6/2015 4:31:00 PM
Tranquil imagery fills the lines Sara... beautiful!!! :)'- olive eloisa
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Date: 2/6/2015 2:32:00 PM
Sara, your poem is enchanting and winsome and captured the feeling of the accompanying picture, well done and best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
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Date: 2/6/2015 1:57:00 PM
- A poem to enjoy Sara, beautiful! - I wish you a great weekend - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/6/2015 11:42:00 AM
Such peaceful tranquil imagery - this is absolutely delightful Sara - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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