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An Ancient Call To the New

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how I see a world losing the back bone to reality

modern ideas dictate against for one the truth being told

hense the symol of the ostrich from an ancient kingdom or the old dynasty 

tells it exactly how the state of welfare should be obeyed 

The ostrich feather of justice weighing values from the heart processed from ethical and moral principles upholding a measure to see right from wrong conflicting roles of chaos needs to be addressed there is a disturbance against the cosmic harmony where blasphemy brings blindness to individual's achieving nothing through lies and violence echoed from tombs declarations ape made laws that attack the very weakest human right : "I have given bread to the hungry and clothed the naked" and "I was a husband to the widow and father to the orphan does this ring with any bells of clarity where has charity gone A passage in the Instruction of Ptahhotep presents Ma'at as follows: represents for me in person law of the universe Ma'at is good and its worth is lasting. It has not been disturbed since the day of its creator, whereas he who transgresses its ordinances is punished. It lies as a path in front even of him who knows nothing. Wrongdoing has never yet brought its venture to port. It is true that evil may gain wealth but the strength of truth is that it lasts; a man can say: "It was the property of my father. I found this ancient writing modern before it's time we as a world condemn the living slip into the dark ages of slavery

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Date: 9/9/2018 10:17:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow! Very powerful, excellent poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned.Very heartfelt! The World is all upside down!It breaks my heart to see all horrible, sad, evil acts done against God, people in all! All signs of the last days according to the Bible, Liam.Prayers are very powerful, n' we need pray to God now more than ever for lost souls to accept Jesus.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A Fav!Please, take good care of yourself!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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