An American Songbird

Lovely Cardinal, Sitting on mail box in snow. Brilliant red feathers aglow. Sings winters solstice In time for Merry Christmas. Sun is far from equator. Giving solitude For the first day of winter, December the twenty first!
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Dufresne Avatar
December 20, 2009 at 5:18 AM
enjoyed this nature watch through your eyes. Robert
Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 6:14 PM
Magnificent vivid imagery captured ...thanks so much for sharing and for your kind comments~Mary
Townsend Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 10:31 AM
Great imagery! I love this write it is so calming. We used to have a Cardinal that loved to sit in the branches of the tiny evergreen in the yard beside my home. It was a beautiful and peaceful sight. Sometimes I would watch for hours just waiting to see that beautiful bird. Thanks for sharing! Smiles from Lolita
White Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 6:00 PM
what a lovely picture this paints, and thank u for tthe comments on my write, take care Dnyce
Culverhouse Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 4:15 PM
nicely penned, enjoyed!! cardinals in snow are are so pretty! I only get to see them in pictures we don't have snow much.
Sweetheart Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 9:05 AM
Lovely Choka Marty.. could see the vibrant red against the white snow... luv.. LMBPEPSS
Brown Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 8:54 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Marty. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and compassion for others. Inspiration is waiting for you grab it and write. Love, Carol
Pickett Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 4:42 AM
I have never done a choka before... But I will... I like the flow of this piece...RdP
Chircop Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 3:18 PM
Your poem s like the christmas cards im writing indeed a magical view.. a gem--Charma
Devonshire Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 2:38 PM
Brilliant image of the caridinel against the snowy mailbox on the shortest day of the year. Magnificent choka, Marty! Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 1:48 PM
Interesting contrast of the red male cardinal to the white of the snow. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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