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An Amber Whisper

. ..the daybreak's amber translucence weaves through the window curtain like lustrous satin that drapes and falls on the ruffled folds of the bed, as I let your whisper sink slowly, slowly in.. .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/4/2011 1:53:00 AM
I so love this piece Romeo. You've managed to paint such a beautiful picture with just a few words. Nice work, best wishes Em :)
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Romeo Naces
Date: 5/29/2019 10:52:00 PM
Thanks, Emma.

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