An Amber Whisper

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..the daybreak's

        amber translucence 

               weaves through 

        the window curtain

like lustrous satin


that drapes and falls 

        on the ruffled folds

                of the bed, as I let 

        your whisper sink 

slowly, slowly in..

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mantle Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 1:53 AM
I so love this piece Romeo. You've managed to paint such a beautiful picture with just a few words. Nice work, best wishes Em :)
Naces Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 10:52 PM
Thanks, Emma.
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