An Aloha Afternoon




      dreams of Hawaii
      sensuous coconut wax
      Aloha aroma-oh
      
      
  
       September 7, 2020
          12:30pm PST


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Watt Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 11:08 PM
The smell of coconut sun oil makes me think of Hawaii. Thanks for the journey to paradise (and no air fare!). Loved it. Hugs ~ John
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September 7, 2020 at 9:49 PM
Sounds like paradise indeed and your evocative words have taken me there. Wow such a treat my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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September 7, 2020 at 4:22 PM
Panagiota, A ‘o ia! Lovely afternoon in your poem. Truly paradise for some. -Richard
Romios Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 6:42 PM
Hi Richard, Nice you visited. It is an aromatic afternoon.. Love, Panagiota xxx
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 2:49 PM
Hello Panagiota \i love the coconuts. Have you ever been to Hawaii? Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo
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September 8, 2020 at 12:18 PM
Hello Panagiota, I do love the coconuts. My husband wa\s there with wife number 2. I have never been there.Love Darlene xxxx-oooo.
Romios Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 6:39 PM
Hello, Darlene! No, I have never been there, sorry to say but." oh that scent in the house.... is enchanting! Mmm Love, Panagiota xxx
James Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 2:45 PM
Can smell the coconuts from here, never been to Hawaii, maybe one day. Emilia x
Romios Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 6:35 PM
Hi Emilia! Go one day. I heard it's superb! . Love, Panagiota xxx
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September 7, 2020 at 1:21 PM
Nicely versed, Pangie! We spent a week in HI after our three year AF tour in Japan. Pure bliss!
Romios Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 6:33 PM
Hello Bob, Glad you got to be there ater Japan. Must be awesome. Love, Panagiota xx
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