An Aloha Afternoon

dreams of Hawaii sensuous coconut wax Aloha aroma-oh September 7, 2020 12:30pm PST

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John Watt

Date: 9/7/2020 11:08:00 PM

The smell of coconut sun oil makes me think of Hawaii. Thanks for the journey to paradise (and no air fare!). Loved it. Hugs ~ John

Ann Gilmour

Date: 9/7/2020 9:49:00 PM

Sounds like paradise indeed and your evocative words have taken me there. Wow such a treat my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/7/2020 4:22:00 PM

Panagiota, A ‘o ia! Lovely afternoon in your poem. Truly paradise for some. -Richard

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/7/2020 6:42:00 PM

Hi Richard, Nice you visited. It is an aromatic afternoon.. Love, Panagiota xxx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/7/2020 2:49:00 PM

Hello Panagiota \i love the coconuts. Have you ever been to Hawaii? Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/8/2020 12:18:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, I do love the coconuts. My husband wa\s there with wife number 2. I have never been there.Love Darlene xxxx-oooo.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/7/2020 6:39:00 PM

Hello, Darlene! No, I have never been there, sorry to say but." oh that scent in the house.... is enchanting! Mmm Love, Panagiota xxx

Emilia James

Date: 9/7/2020 2:45:00 PM

Can smell the coconuts from here, never been to Hawaii, maybe one day. Emilia x

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/7/2020 6:35:00 PM

Hi Emilia! Go one day. I heard it's superb! . Love, Panagiota xxx

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 9/7/2020 1:21:00 PM

Nicely versed, Pangie! We spent a week in HI after our three year AF tour in Japan. Pure bliss!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/7/2020 6:33:00 PM

Hello Bob, Glad you got to be there ater Japan. Must be awesome. Love, Panagiota xx