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AN ALBERTINE GOODBYE-DODO

a delicate petalled rose
flutters slowly from on high,
upon the green sward,to lie-
dying sans a sigh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kauffman Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 3:03 PM
This is a beautiful, climbing rose, Brian. Your poem is filled with a plaintive, melancholy as the beautiful rose dies unseen and unnoticed. Thank you for this verse. Blessings and congratulations to you!
Kendrick Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 9:28 PM
interesting line: upon the green sward. Congrats and thank you, Brian, for entering my contest!
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