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An Air Balloon Ride To Heaven

Air Balloon Ride contest:



                                  "An Air Balloon Ride to Heaven"


             
                                       riding through the clouds..
                               
                                     my hands reaching to heaven..

                                         now holding Dad's hand..

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 3:57:00 AM

Congratulations Michael on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2011 5:29:00 PM

Hi, Michael,, Congratulations in the contest. Sadly a bit at the end, but with good imaginationnnn.. enjoyed,..p.d.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/10/2011 2:57:00 PM

Hello Michael, So glad you won for this wonderful poem. It is one of my favorites and I love it. Hope your New Year is going great. Love, Shar

James Fraser

Date: 1/10/2011 10:23:00 AM

Emotionally warm Haiku Michael, I can feel your heart strings pulling in this lovely tribute. Many congratulation's on your beautiful tender piece....:)

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 1/10/2011 10:01:00 AM

Interesting point, Michael. We sometimes forget that it is the kids that have the most fun in those balloon rides. Great write and win. Dan C

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/10/2011 8:08:00 AM

Oh wow....I love the tender sentiment, it brings a tear to my eyes, Michael. Love this very much !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2011 7:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/10/2011 7:33:00 AM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Skat, Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2011 7:07:00 AM

So happy this scored high. A very well deserved win and congratulations, Michael!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/10/2011 2:54:00 AM

Many congratulations for this wonderful win Micheal.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/10/2011 12:02:00 AM

you got it!! congrats in the big win, michael.. :) nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/9/2011 11:36:00 PM

Congrats my White Knight on your 2nd place win in Irma's hot air balloon contest with this magical ride luv.. happy to share second with u and of course we are celebrating today with the teams that won ... over the weekend.. kukos to Mrs. W.K. on those JETS... am right there with her cheering them along too.. bravo my W.K. from your Jersey Girl forever and always with luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/9/2011 10:30:00 PM

Mr. F congratulations on your win with this beautiful write in Irma's contests, love Wilma

Skat A

Date: 1/9/2011 9:58:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS!!!A VERY TOUCHY ENDING TO YOUR RIDE. I SURE LOVED IT. THANKS MICHAEL FOR THE SUPPORT.. IRMA

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 12/12/2010 9:41:00 AM

Beautifully touching and so much more than a balloon ride ~ Sharon :)

Deb Radke

Date: 12/9/2010 12:57:00 PM

This is so good. You really felt this poem, didn't you. Another one of my favorites, Michael.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 12/7/2010 2:12:00 PM

Oh Michael, This is so beautiful, you made me tear up and I thought about Dad. Just wonderful! As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/7/2010 6:41:00 AM

Magnificent Michael.. a truly inspiring Haiku painted with your words so deep... u need a "t" in the title right before the Haiku my friend.. so not to be disqualified for a mini error luv... Jersey Girl always looking out for White Knight of P.S. with luv..

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/7/2010 2:21:00 AM

What a twist in the end,What a beauty,goin tmfvs. .I do wish you do well in contest. .C.C

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/6/2010 10:43:00 AM

A beautiful entry Michael.. Your dad sure are smiling hun... love Wilma