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AN AGING PAGE on a frozen floor silent consonants scatter smelling of black roses’ filth, chair without audience fleeing from abused vowels… now alone, an aging page

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2011 10:14:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in ^Rick Parise's "Chair In A Shadowed Room" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/8/2011 5:50:00 PM

so strange what different folks get from the same image it feel like witnesses at a crime scene?? I would never have thought this chair heard any music? such a mind you have...so many yummy nooks and crannies! Congrad's Light & Love

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/8/2011 5:23:00 AM

Another awesome win for you Nette! Congratulations to you

Joseph Osita

Date: 6/8/2011 3:08:00 AM

congrats on your well deserved win in Rick Praise's contest

Dalila Agtani

Date: 6/7/2011 9:19:00 PM

Hello Nette Fascinating Choka! Now you get me excited to write a choka. Thanks for your positive comments on my poems! I did not even know you are a Filipina when I joined your contest. Yes I am a Filipina. I've been addicted to poetry since April. I will follow you here in Soup! Dalila

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/7/2011 9:12:00 PM

Congrats Nette on another terrific win in Rick's contest with this wonderful creation my friend.. beautiful words .. and my J.J. would have been 21 this month... June 13th ..luv..thankxx for asking and enjoying my touching write luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2011 8:13:00 PM

I loved this the first time!! Congrats on your awesome win, my friend.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/7/2011 6:33:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of rick, nette

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/7/2011 7:30:00 AM

Wow...this is a deeply thought out poem! A winner, Nette!

Charles Henderson

Date: 6/6/2011 11:07:00 PM

This is definitely one of your best poems. I love it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2011 9:59:00 PM

awesome, relating the chair to poetry. Great imagery in this choka and sure to please the judge!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/4/2011 5:03:00 PM

wow a super stupendous write Nette my friend.. amazing premise for the empty chair photo.. good luck with this winning one luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/4/2011 4:02:00 PM

What a fantastic use of imagery nette, good luck in the contest,

James Foulk

Date: 6/4/2011 3:25:00 PM

what a piece of creative poetry you wrote, enjoyed it very much. thank you for commenting on Brave Little Campers.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/4/2011 2:56:00 PM

shiver...perhaps I will write a reply ;)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/4/2011 2:43:00 PM

How simple and poignant. I enjoyed this write showing the letters personified. Awesome work. Poor page,......now all alone. Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/4/2011 2:06:00 PM

Very unique and imaginative take on the contest, Nette. It's funny how different people can look at the same picture and come up with a wide range of interpretations. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin

Date: 6/4/2011 1:26:00 PM

Solitary. What is it the movie star said - "I vant to be alone." Just my interpretation. Love, daver

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 6/4/2011 12:37:00 PM

* “Peering Into Its Depthful Light * A Rose Not Black But Bright * Tis What I Find * Beautiful Colours * Amid The Lines * My Dear Sweeet Rare & Beautiful * Diamond In The Prose Nette. * We May Wish to Flee The Shadows Trace * Yet * Tis Leads Us Towards That Glorious Place * Beauties Day. * I Miss You & I Love You * Beautiful Poem * Hugggggs & Kisssses * Always & Forever * Luv * Sarah.” *

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/4/2011 12:05:00 PM

Nette, I love where you took this piece of yours.. Lovely approach, wishing you all the best for the contest ;) *hugs*