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An Aging Page

AN AGING PAGE



on a frozen floor

   silent consonants scatter

      smelling of black roses’ filth,

         chair without audience

            fleeing from abused vowels…

now alone, an aging page

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 9, 2011 at 10:14 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in ^Rick Parise's "Chair In A Shadowed Room" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

June 8, 2011 at 5:50 PM

so strange what different folks get from the same image it feel like witnesses at a crime scene?? I would never have thought this chair heard any music? such a mind you have...so many yummy nooks and crannies! Congrad's Light & Love

Robert A. Dufresne

June 8, 2011 at 5:23 AM

Another awesome win for you Nette! Congratulations to you

Joseph Osita

June 8, 2011 at 3:08 AM

congrats on your well deserved win in Rick Praise's contest

Dalila Agtani

June 7, 2011 at 9:19 PM

Hello Nette Fascinating Choka! Now you get me excited to write a choka. Thanks for your positive comments on my poems! I did not even know you are a Filipina when I joined your contest. Yes I am a Filipina. I've been addicted to poetry since April. I will follow you here in Soup! Dalila

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 7, 2011 at 9:12 PM

Congrats Nette on another terrific win in Rick's contest with this wonderful creation my friend.. beautiful words .. and my J.J. would have been 21 this month... June 13th ..luv..thankxx for asking and enjoying my touching write luv..

Andrea Dietrich

June 7, 2011 at 8:13 PM

I loved this the first time!! Congrats on your awesome win, my friend.

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 7, 2011 at 6:33 PM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of rick, nette

Carrie Richards

June 7, 2011 at 7:30 AM

Wow...this is a deeply thought out poem! A winner, Nette!

Charles Henderson

June 6, 2011 at 11:07 PM

This is definitely one of your best poems. I love it.

Andrea Dietrich

June 4, 2011 at 9:59 PM

awesome, relating the chair to poetry. Great imagery in this choka and sure to please the judge!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 4, 2011 at 5:03 PM

wow a super stupendous write Nette my friend.. amazing premise for the empty chair photo.. good luck with this winning one luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 4, 2011 at 4:02 PM

What a fantastic use of imagery nette, good luck in the contest,

James Foulk

June 4, 2011 at 3:25 PM

what a piece of creative poetry you wrote, enjoyed it very much. thank you for commenting on Brave Little Campers.

Debbie Guzzi

June 4, 2011 at 2:56 PM

shiver...perhaps I will write a reply ;)

Gwendolen Song

June 4, 2011 at 2:43 PM

How simple and poignant. I enjoyed this write showing the letters personified. Awesome work. Poor page,......now all alone. Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

June 4, 2011 at 2:06 PM

Very unique and imaginative take on the contest, Nette. It's funny how different people can look at the same picture and come up with a wide range of interpretations. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin

June 4, 2011 at 1:26 PM

Solitary. What is it the movie star said - "I vant to be alone." Just my interpretation. Love, daver

Sarah Seraphin

June 4, 2011 at 12:37 PM

* “Peering Into Its Depthful Light * A Rose Not Black But Bright * Tis What I Find * Beautiful Colours * Amid The Lines * My Dear Sweeet Rare & Beautiful * Diamond In The Prose Nette. * We May Wish to Flee The Shadows Trace * Yet * Tis Leads Us Towards That Glorious Place * Beauties Day. * I Miss You & I Love You * Beautiful Poem * Hugggggs & Kisssses * Always & Forever * Luv * Sarah.” *