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An Age Old Story

Once knew this fellow named Fred But sadly poor Fred is now dead His devious wife Stabbed Fred with a knife Preferred a stud with a new weapon instead © Jack Ellison 2015

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Tim Smith

Date: 9/22/2015 6:32:00 PM

A stud with a weapon of steel...Made her giggle and laugh and to squeal...but unknown to she...the stud wasn't a he...and the weapon of choice wasn't real

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/23/2015 7:59:00 AM

You seem to be enjoying your new role as Limmertim!!! Go Tim go!!!

Michael Tor

Date: 9/22/2015 12:24:00 PM

lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Fred. Fred looking back, wished he had, something larger, instead. lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/22/2015 12:32:00 PM

Hey Michael... you're getting into the swing of it!!! Have a great day!!!

Judy Konos

Date: 9/22/2015 11:28:00 AM

This is extremely interesting...would it be possible for you to go in depth regarding this new weapon? Just wondering....

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/22/2015 12:02:00 PM

Perhaps I should explain it an email... don't want to get booted! LOL Methinks, you probably have guessed anyway!!! Love, Jackson xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/22/2015 11:25:00 AM

Jack be nimble... Jack be quick... How can you write so much... so quick?... PS.Dragon wrote that and I'm so proud! Grandpa Troll says to stop watching so many murder mysteries before bed time...

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/22/2015 12:00:00 PM

Is Dragon a member of PS? If not, get him to join! LOL Love, Nimble Jack xxxx