An Age Old Story

Once knew this fellow named Fred But sadly poor Fred is now dead His devious wife Stabbed Fred with a knife Preferred a stud with a new weapon instead © Jack Ellison 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Smith Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 6:32 PM
A stud with a weapon of steel...Made her giggle and laugh and to squeal...but unknown to she...the stud wasn't a he...and the weapon of choice wasn't real
Ellison Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 7:59 AM
You seem to be enjoying your new role as Limmertim!!! Go Tim go!!!
Tor Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 12:24 PM
lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Fred. Fred looking back, wished he had, something larger, instead. lol
Ellison Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 12:32 PM
Hey Michael... you're getting into the swing of it!!! Have a great day!!!
Konos Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 11:28 AM
This is extremely interesting...would it be possible for you to go in depth regarding this new weapon? Just wondering....
Ellison Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 12:02 PM
Perhaps I should explain it an email... don't want to get booted! LOL Methinks, you probably have guessed anyway!!! Love, Jackson xxx
Eastman Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 11:25 AM
Jack be nimble... Jack be quick... How can you write so much... so quick?... PS.Dragon wrote that and I'm so proud! Grandpa Troll says to stop watching so many murder mysteries before bed time...
Ellison Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 12:00 PM
Is Dragon a member of PS? If not, get him to join! LOL Love, Nimble Jack xxxx
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