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The Rime Couée is:

stanzaic, written in any number of sixains made up of two tercets.

accentual, folk meter of normal speech. L1,L2, L4, L5 are longer lines of a similar length, L3 and L6 are shorter lines of the same length.

rhymed, rhyme scheme aabccb, ddeffe etc.

 

Paris is a neon city of lights, color, and myth, where people go out on a Friday night with enthusiastic faces. Eagles of Death, metal band were rocking it at Bataclan Hall with oldies and their latest hit, covering all their bases. Happy voices and music mingle mid-air for the city of light doesn't have a care life moves merrily on. And yet, all of that is soon about to change their world will become bazaar and strange their dreams all gone. A human bomb tears into flesh and bone but that suicide bomber did not come alone the carnage has begun. At multiple locations near and in the city people are brutally murdered without pity, by madmen with a gun. Men of fanatical faith, filled with hate, using religion to kill, choose their fate, martyrs for a cause. Innocence slaughtered in Allah's name bought ISIS scorn and infamous shame, and fickle applause. We commiserate with the people of France that was more than a depraved act of chance, that was an act of war! To prevent more atrocities, countries must unite, and eradicate ISIS bases with a military might the world's never seen before! (Rhyme) 11/23/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/26/2018 9:12:00 PM
Powerful political statement, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/9/2016 2:27:00 PM
Emile, Congratulations on your awesome win. LINDA
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Date: 1/9/2016 3:09:00 PM
Thanks LINDA, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 1/5/2016 2:52:00 PM
Well done, Emile! Congrats on your placement! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/6/2016 8:29:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 1/4/2016 10:12:00 AM
EMILE. CONGRATULATIONS on your win. HugS *SKAT*
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Date: 1/4/2016 2:07:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 1/4/2016 6:26:00 AM
Congrats, Emile, a strong piece and call to arms. Regards, Viv
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/4/2016 7:56:00 AM
Thanks Viv, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 1/3/2016 8:05:00 PM
Congrad's on your winning entry. Light & Love
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/4/2016 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Debbie, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 12/9/2015 9:01:00 PM
Profound write, Emile! Good luck in the contest.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/10/2015 9:36:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

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