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An Act of Choosing

an act of choosing

     a choice you and I
sadness with smiles tell lies
probabilities

     in life ups and downs
smile sneers eyes leers ogled glance
probable options

     measure for measure
the pits depth zenith crest base
an act of choosing
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PENNED ON JULY 18, 2014!
for haiku on probabilities contest!

Copyright © Verlena S. Walker | Year Posted 2014

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Scott Thirtyseven Date: 8/11/2014 9:20:00 AM an act of choosing indeed, and this poem was well chosen in the winners list. Congrats. Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/11/2014 9:32:00 AM Thanks Scott for your compliments and supportive comments. Verlena

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/11/2014 8:09:00 AM Great haikus Verlena ! U hv said much in few words. Really it's upto us what we want to choose, congrats on huge win! Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/11/2014 9:33:00 AM Thanks Dr. Upma for your supportive remarks... Verlena

Sam Raj Date: 8/9/2014 11:12:00 AM Hi Verlena, Congrats on the big win. A very nice write full of probable facts! TC:-) Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/9/2014 2:37:00 PM Thanks Sam... Verlena

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 8/9/2014 9:39:00 AM Congratulations on your wonderful win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful haiku. Excellent write! Pandita Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/9/2014 2:37:00 PM Thanks Pandita for your congratulations! Verlena

Dr Anuradha Moogi Date: 8/8/2014 10:13:00 PM We'll deserved!!!!! Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/8/2014 10:57:00 PM Thanks Dr. Moogi for your high marks. A compliment I have enjoyed... Verlena

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/8/2014 9:47:00 PM well penned and crafted piece, Verlena. congrats Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/8/2014 10:09:00 PM thanks Dr. Mehta for the congrats... Verlena

Casarah Nance Date: 8/8/2014 8:59:00 PM Grats on your win Verlena Well done :) :) Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/8/2014 10:10:00 PM Thanks Casarah for the congrats! I see that you took first place. Nice to be amongst winners for a change... Verlena

Robert Lindley Date: 8/8/2014 8:24:00 PM Returning to see your fine win my friend! Big congrats!!! Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/8/2014 8:36:00 PM Thanks Robert. Verlena

D.W. Rodgers Date: 8/8/2014 7:37:00 PM Well penned, congrats on your win Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/8/2014 7:45:00 PM Thanks Dave... Verlena

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/8/2014 7:33:00 PM Well done, Congrats! Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/8/2014 7:45:00 PM Thanks Rick... Verlena

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/8/2014 6:55:00 PM Big congrats on a big win, Verlena! Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/8/2014 7:08:00 PM Thanks Andrea on your congrats... Verlena

Jan Allison Date: 8/8/2014 6:25:00 PM congratulations on your fine win Verlena:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/8/2014 6:36:00 PM Thanks for your congratulations Jan. I have enjoyed doing this poem... Verlena

Paul Callus Date: 8/8/2014 2:23:00 PM Excellent haiku, Verlana. The choice is probably in our hands. Congrats on a fine win. // paul Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/8/2014 3:19:00 PM Thanks Paul. Individuals do and many times must make their own choices. Verlena

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 7/25/2014 12:54:00 PM WOW! Haiku Magic. Also, Zenith is in my top 5 favorite words. I posted a poem on here called Zenith...something or other a couple years ago. It's an A-Z, letter usage poem. I think it's called Abercrombie style. Don't quote me on that. It's Ab something. Did I mention names are not a strong suit for me along with reading? expanding on earlier, if my wife didnt type my comments no one on this site would read any of my poems. Also, I wouldn't be able to hear such nice words penned by you all. Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/8/2014 3:20:00 PM Thanks JS for your heartfelt remarks... Verlena Verlena S. Walker Date: 7/25/2014 1:43:00 PM Thanks JS for reading my poetry... You roc! Verlena

Robert Lindley Date: 7/21/2014 9:37:00 AM Great writes my friend!! I sent you a pm here. Best of luck in the contest!! Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 7/21/2014 2:14:00 PM Thanks Robert... Hugs Verlena