Anisha Dutta Poet Verse

An Ache

AN ACHE

           My pierced heart 
           secreting nectar
           slowly solidifying 
            to form pearl of dolour.



  05/ 15 / 22
                      Second place

“Naani “ Contest by Joseph May

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Eve Roper May 27, 2022 at 10:30 AM Congratulations, Anisha, on your win in the Naani Form in Joseph May contest. Blessings my friend

Sam Kauffman May 25, 2022 at 11:39 AM Ah, the heart like an oyster creating a pearl with sad melancholy in the center. Wonderful use of metaphor and vivid, relatable imagery. Congratulations on your win with this plaintive, evocative poem. Blessings!

Christuraj Alex May 25, 2022 at 9:29 AM What an ache! Congratulations!

Jo Chamberlain May 24, 2022 at 5:46 AM Congratulations on your winning placement.

Paulette Calasibetta May 23, 2022 at 4:05 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest. A lovely piece. :)Paulette Anisha Dutta May 23, 2022 at 9:27 PM Thanks Paulette. Love.

Joseph May May 23, 2022 at 1:51 PM Very nicely penned Anisha, Congrats on your win Anisha Dutta May 23, 2022 at 9:30 PM Thanks Joseph. Blessings