An Ache

AN ACHE My pierced heart secreting nectar slowly solidifying to form pearl of dolour. 05/ 15 / 22 Second place “Naani “ Contest by Joseph May

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/27/2022 10:30:00 AM

Congratulations, Anisha, on your win in the Naani Form in Joseph May contest. Blessings my friend

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/25/2022 11:39:00 AM

Ah, the heart like an oyster creating a pearl with sad melancholy in the center. Wonderful use of metaphor and vivid, relatable imagery. Congratulations on your win with this plaintive, evocative poem. Blessings!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/25/2022 9:29:00 AM

What an ache! Congratulations!

Joanna Feltham

Date: 5/24/2022 5:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning placement.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 5/23/2022 4:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest. A lovely piece. :)Paulette

Anisha Dutta
Date: 5/23/2022 9:27:00 PM

Thanks Paulette. Love.

Joseph May

Date: 5/23/2022 1:51:00 PM

Very nicely penned Anisha, Congrats on your win

Anisha Dutta
Date: 5/23/2022 9:30:00 PM

Thanks Joseph. Blessings