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Amplified Questions

amplified questions I sit alone atop a mountain my guitar in hand peering out over the valley below beyond green patched rifts playing in the key of lost dreams fractured chords out of tune with decisions in distorted decibels high volume idiocy wailing as I telecast amplified questions which now return to me in the feedback of my own doing

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/24/2017 4:45:00 PM

Yeah, I think you have been burning the late night mystic oil. Ha ha ha. Love and more love to you, bro.

Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2017 4:52:00 PM

I have been a little tired lately, maybe that's it. :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/24/2017 4:43:00 PM

Very existential cool, this poem is, Chris. The musical metaphors are spot on. This is a 7 up poem for sure. It's a fave too w/lines like ... high volume idiocy wailing. That is some creative mojo you conjured up, my friend. Have you been burning the midnight jojoba oil? Love this poem though. Very consciousness expanding poetry. Love and joy to you.

Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2017 4:52:00 PM

Thanks so much my friend. I am so happy you liked this one. I just wanted to project a feeling of regret and a little loneliness in an abstract musical themed way. I wasn't sure if I got it or not.

Darren White

Date: 1/23/2017 11:58:00 PM

Keep asking you for music, ain't I a real li'l pest, lol. I love your poems, always, and especially so when your music comes in.

Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2017 9:46:00 AM

Soon my friend, soon. :) Thanks so much Darren.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/23/2017 4:48:00 PM

Hi Chris, You've painted a good picture with your words. It was a bit dark yet still beautiful. The metaphors and imagery flowed together well. We all have unanswered questions in our lives. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2017 4:57:00 PM

Thanks so very much Alexis for always being so nice to me.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/23/2017 3:54:00 PM

Wow . Good one Chris. I love the mountains and I can just picture this :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2017 4:56:00 PM

Thank you so very much Heidi. :)