Amphitrite

She walked in fluid nature of her own romantic sighs Tranquil vibes ebbs dim candlelight from the starry skies Stuck inside a dream, a victim of the moaning sea of the air I breathed, I hunger and buckle to my knees Caused by her ambience waves of deep vibrant royal blue surroundings and enchanted silent creeping through Amphitrite the goddess – queen of the sea unfurl her children around her neck each sealed in each lustrous pearl So striking in a twilight blue silk gown like the night fits perfectly against her slight curves quite a lovely sight Silk open toe stiletto heels lace up her legs with grace layered long hair along her sun kissed heart-shaped face With a smile she entwined her arms with mine and out the open door When morning came, to leave me lonely as before Poseidon, I see why you were captivated by her exquisiteness always by your side in your chariot drawn by fish-tailed horses
5/5/2017
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Date: 7/18/2018 4:49:00 PM
an exquisite tale! Winner indeed!
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Date: 7/17/2018 8:39:00 AM
Wow Eve! I enjoyed this. Mystical, beautifully written. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/17/2018 3:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brian's contest, Eve - blessings for many more, my friend! :-)
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Date: 5/30/2017 7:04:00 PM
Your poem reminds me of the Poseidon I have enjoyed this poem.
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Date: 5/21/2017 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! A great poem for me to read this morn as it jogged my memory on Poseidon and sea mythology.
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Date: 5/20/2017 7:47:00 PM
Beautifully penned Eve..Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/9/2017 2:36:00 PM
I found your descriptions quite enchanting, Eve. Beautifully written...Quite a tributary piece to this goddess..
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Date: 5/8/2017 12:42:00 PM
the fluidity of your pen and the wonder of myth enthrall me, eve... beautifully scribed.. huggs
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Date: 5/8/2017 8:33:00 AM
Excellent. Very romantic write. Lovely. Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 5/8/2017 2:46:00 AM
Eve, this poem is exquisite! Lovely and romantic rhyme!7 ; )
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Date: 5/7/2017 10:37:00 PM
Oh eve, this is so delicious and romantic, loved this poem!!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/8/2017 12:20:00 AM
Thank you, Arthur.~*
Date: 5/7/2017 9:33:00 PM
Romantic beauty Eve!
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Date: 5/7/2017 7:57:00 PM
Superbly orchestrated my friend...a delight to read...all the best...a top winner in my eyes...^WW^
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Date: 5/6/2017 6:58:00 PM
Hello Eve, As it is said in the German language, this rhyme is both "wunderbar" (wonderful) and "fabelhaft" (fabulous) for sure. The descriptive beauty, and the power, pitch, and tenor of your eight rhymed couplets are absolutely superb in every respect here. The use of mythology in this particular write makes it all the more compelling and captivating!! Outstanding!! A DEFINITE SEVEN/FAVE IN MY BOOK OF GREAT POEMS!! Best Always, Gary
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/6/2017 9:07:00 PM
Thank you, Gary, it means alot to me. ~*
Date: 5/6/2017 4:58:00 PM
A very magical read that fitted so perfect with the relaxing music playing in my ear. Both together created a scene of pure pulchritudinous images in my mind, very well wrote and structured Best Wishes Marko :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/6/2017 9:09:00 PM
Thank you, Marko, for your wonderful compliment ~*
Date: 5/5/2017 11:29:00 PM
Hi Eve, I don't know much about Mythology but I did like reading this lovely poem so beautifully written,.....take care......Vera
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Date: 5/5/2017 7:08:00 AM
Very mystical and enchanting Eve. I really enjoyed this as it took to another realm as I read. Really nicely done
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