Amphitrite

She walked in fluid nature of her own romantic sighs Tranquil vibes ebbs dim candlelight from the starry skies Stuck inside a dream, a victim of the moaning sea of the air I breathed, I hunger and buckle to my knees Caused by her ambience waves of deep vibrant royal blue surroundings and enchanted silent creeping through Amphitrite the goddess – queen of the sea unfurl her children around her neck each sealed in each lustrous pearl So striking in a twilight blue silk gown like the night fits perfectly against her slight curves quite a lovely sight Silk open toe stiletto heels lace up her legs with grace layered long hair along her sun kissed heart-shaped face With a smile she entwined her arms with mine and out the open door When morning came, to leave me lonely as before Poseidon, I see why you were captivated by her exquisiteness always by your side in your chariot drawn by fish-tailed horses
5/5/2017
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Waters Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 4:49 PM
an exquisite tale! Winner indeed!
Gentry Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 8:39 AM
Wow Eve! I enjoyed this. Mystical, beautifully written. Congratulations on your win!
Barden Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 3:19 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brian's contest, Eve - blessings for many more, my friend! :-)
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 7:04 PM
Your poem reminds me of the Poseidon I have enjoyed this poem.
Lindley Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations on your win! A great poem for me to read this morn as it jogged my memory on Poseidon and sea mythology.
May Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 7:47 PM
Beautifully penned Eve..Congrats on your win
Manassian Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 2:36 PM
I found your descriptions quite enchanting, Eve. Beautifully written...Quite a tributary piece to this goddess..
Onclaud Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 12:42 PM
the fluidity of your pen and the wonder of myth enthrall me, eve... beautifully scribed.. huggs
Sathasivam Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Excellent. Very romantic write. Lovely. Thanks for sharing it
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 2:46 AM
Eve, this poem is exquisite! Lovely and romantic rhyme!7 ; )
Vaso Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 10:37 PM
Oh eve, this is so delicious and romantic, loved this poem!!!
Roper Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 12:20 AM
Thank you, Arthur.~*
Goff Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 9:33 PM
Romantic beauty Eve!
Warrior Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Superbly orchestrated my friend...a delight to read...all the best...a top winner in my eyes...^WW^
Bateman Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 6:58 PM
Hello Eve, As it is said in the German language, this rhyme is both "wunderbar" (wonderful) and "fabelhaft" (fabulous) for sure. The descriptive beauty, and the power, pitch, and tenor of your eight rhymed couplets are absolutely superb in every respect here. The use of mythology in this particular write makes it all the more compelling and captivating!! Outstanding!! A DEFINITE SEVEN/FAVE IN MY BOOK OF GREAT POEMS!! Best Always, Gary
Roper Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 9:07 PM
Thank you, Gary, it means alot to me. ~*
Kyoto Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 4:58 PM
A very magical read that fitted so perfect with the relaxing music playing in my ear. Both together created a scene of pure pulchritudinous images in my mind, very well wrote and structured Best Wishes Marko :)
Roper Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 9:09 PM
Thank you, Marko, for your wonderful compliment ~*
Duggan Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 11:29 PM
Hi Eve, I don't know much about Mythology but I did like reading this lovely poem so beautifully written,.....take care......Vera
Green Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 7:08 AM
Very mystical and enchanting Eve. I really enjoyed this as it took to another realm as I read. Really nicely done
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