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Had a dream about riding this horse..

. Summer had her delights With sunny days, warm nights. Fall brings a little chill Cool nights, frost on high hills. Colors change upon trees This for most surely please. Now is time for amour Adoration galore. Did view you from afar Now will learn who you are. Long to ride upon your back Hold your mane, feel your tack.. Contest: "Two To Fourteen" Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/13/2011 8:48:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your placement in Brian's sponsored contest Sara. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2011 10:53:00 PM

This is quite nice. I would say a charming array of couplets, Sara!!

Edward Ebbs

Date: 10/10/2011 11:14:00 PM

Congrats! I like it :-) Very Nice...

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 10/9/2011 6:16:00 PM

nice twist sara. riding a horse in the fall w/all the colored leaves sounds wonderful. congratulations on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/9/2011 5:49:00 PM

Congrats Sara on first place win with this awesome poetry my friend.. appreciate your kind comments on my latest contest post too..luv.

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/9/2011 5:17:00 PM

Congratulations Sara on a 1st class win... and great write. also check out my blog, i put an answer there for you, when on your comment box i could not get through...

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 10/9/2011 2:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win with this wonderful poem, nice ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!=======Lori

Jl Sadberry

Date: 10/8/2011 7:10:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “I Love The Twist At The End of This, Somewhat Stirring The Senses Verse My Dear, Precious & Beautiful Sara! *^_^* If I Were A Horse of Course of Course *^_#* I Would Love Your Beauty I Believe, to Guide Me Through The Night &, As for The Black Widow My Dear *^_^* Perhaps A Tad Preoccupied & Oblivious Unto That Bluebird Up In Sky *^_^* Beautiful Painting Sara; Just Like You!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *

Ray Dillard

Date: 10/8/2011 6:46:00 PM

Very nice Sara! Good Luck in Brian's contest. RAY

Jack Horne

Date: 10/7/2011 4:38:00 PM

Lovely witty piece, Sara. My poem was for someone's pet contest - it was about Paddy: like a whirlwind in the house as a puppy, then growing quiet, and the awful silence after he died. I don't think the sponsor understood either as it didn't place, LOL

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/7/2011 2:23:00 PM

What a delightful description of summer turning to fall. Also enjoyed the double meaning in the last two verses. Everytime I see a horse, I want to ride. Don't get that feeling from most people though I'm glad I had a chance to "learn who you are" when we had lunch. Love and bet wishes in the contest, Carolyn

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 10/7/2011 12:34:00 PM

Nicely written piece. Good luck in the contest. xoxo Robert.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/7/2011 11:56:00 AM

lovely lines for this contest.. luv the incorporation of seasons with luv Sara..good luck in the contest by Brian..happy weekend too..

Marty Owens

Date: 10/7/2011 10:45:00 AM

Very nice Sara...enjoyed reading...good luck in the contest...Marty

Journey Mcknight

Date: 10/7/2011 8:25:00 AM

full of logic and creativity. Liked it Sara. Good morning read. Thanks, Cindy/ under rep.s acct. cause I am a bad, bad, citizen of the soup ya know. I've been here for 5 years. I love reading your work, even if I do not take the time to leave a remark or comment. :)

John Smith

Date: 10/6/2011 11:30:00 PM

Really, is there a bad time of the year for amour? Love your poem. It's full of warmth just as we cool down.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/6/2011 11:13:00 PM

You painted a very beautiful poem Sara! The title is so appropriate for this write! I really enjoyed you work!! You will do well in Brian's contest!!

Don Johnson

Date: 10/6/2011 7:52:00 PM

ride little horse, yes ride, with you i can abide, further down the track, too right!

Dana Smith

Date: 10/6/2011 6:44:00 PM

Really enjoyed this one... Need to catch up with your poetry, they're always so lovely. Take care Sara! Feel free to notify me when you have some more poems up.

Daver Austin

Date: 10/6/2011 5:25:00 PM

Done with child like simplicity. Love, it. Love, daver

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/6/2011 4:33:00 PM

Ah, tis a horse you love! A worthy love to be sure. They are so eloquent.