Amorous Symptoms Poetrix

For you, my mouth is dry
my heart broken into pieces
so much existential pain
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July 27, 2023 at 11:22 AM
Hello Alakas, I read this poem several times. I still do not understand it. Salute my dear friend. /Darlene\
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July 29, 2023 at 5:06 AM
Hello Alakas, Thank you my dear friend. enjoy your day. Salute /Darlene\xxx.
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July 28, 2023 at 7:37 PM
Quite right my dearest, kisses... salute, alkas
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July 28, 2023 at 10:44 AM
Hello Alakas, Symptoms of a lost love: When a husband dies or a wife, that is a lost love? I read it this way. The is breaking from the loss of the spouse. Or a couple breaks up the relationship. Is also a loss. Am I right? Salute my dear friend. /Darlene\
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July 28, 2023 at 12:38 AM
i mean POET IS a faker, same as Fernando Pessoa, salute, alkas
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July 28, 2023 at 12:36 AM
SYMPTOMS OF Lost love...DRY mouth sans kisses, HEART broken into peacesm AND HUGE existential pain due suffering for losing THE one i loved só... tHANK YOU dearest, i Hope ALL clear Now... It IS a lamento poem, but It IS simple creation,,, as POET IS a galera, kisses AND hugs, alkas
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